Dressed as Huo Yuhao, the System Treats Me as a Douluo Commoner?

Don't look at it, I've read 150 chapters, and now I've come to realize that it's the same framework as the original Douluo II, with a little more system assistance. What was originally a difficult victory has become an easy victory, and the soul guidance system is no longer used. Everything else is the same. Tiancan and Electrolux moved in, merged with Wang Dong's martial spirit, accidentally met Ma Xiaotao, and entered the rebirth competition. They went to the polar region to collect the Ice Emperor, revealed the ultimate ice of the second martial spirit, suppressed the evil fire, went to kill the evil soul master's team member who was seriously injured by self-explosion, participated in the competition, and obtained the gold of life. It can be said that the overall framework has not changed at all, only a few insignificant things have been changed. Watching this is basically like watching the Douer Speed ​​​​Edition. What a waste of my 8 dollars.

The martial soul fusion skills are not well written here, they are written according to the original work. This martial soul fusion skill is the dog leash that binds the protagonist. If you want the martial soul fusion skill to be dominated by the protagonist, at least it should be written.

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He wanted to stay away from Tang San, but in the end he engaged in martial soul fusion skills with Wang Dong, and helped win the game even though he knew what Shrek was like

In the early stage, it already has more than 100,000 kilograms of strength (it can also be said that in the early stage, the strength can already kill the ninety-level attack-type Titled Douluo in one second). In the later stage, the Titled Douluo can pass through Huo Yuhao's hands for even one second, which is an insult to the numerical value in the early stage.

What's the difference from the original work? There is only one more system, but the plot has not changed much. In order to keep up with the plot, Douluo compressing his soul power is the biggest failure. Once he becomes a god, no matter how much soul power he has and high-end soul rings, it will become useless. If he adds the ultimate martial soul, he can automatically compress his soul power.

It's too watery. There's a lot of nonsense in Luo Liba. The meaning that can be expressed in one sentence is several sentences. The key is that you don't have any good rhetoric when you make it so long. It's just a repeated sentence. It affects the perception too much

Can the author accept Ma Xiaotao, Zhang Lexuan, Gu Yuena, Ling Luochen, Meng Hongchen, Qiuer? I will definitely give them the votes.

Basically, there is no difference from the original route. The boxing techniques given are outrageous. Shouldn't the boxing techniques be one or more moves? The boxing technique of your protagonist is a kung fu. It can train both physical and mental strength. You might as well write it as Hunyuan Shen Gong. At least it can be seen at a glance that it is a kung fu. Your entire Hunyuan boxing method is also divided into physical training, spiritual training and realm division. It is not like the pure four. And the yin and yang martial arts at the beginning are so high and comprehensive. What else can it be all-inclusive? Absorbing soul beasts can transform martial souls. What are the enhanced attributes? There is nothing else at all. There is no sense of existence. How tall is it? "Suppression without seeing the gap" is the result. The ice that also freezes time has almost no highlight moments. It relies purely on the physical body. The combat power of the physical body is shit. The Poseidon Trident only weighs 18,000 kilograms. The protagonist has just started training in the skin realm and has a full strength of 10,000 kilograms. Why, he has one-tenth of the weight of the artifact-level physical body at the beginning, right? That's it. A few thousand kilograms of punch power is equivalent to the attack-type soul master. Are you funny? The combat power collapsed at the beginning, and the emotional line was not even visible. It took more than 200 chapters to determine the relationship. Basically there is none. The emotional scenes come out of nowhere. The same thing in Dragon Valley is purely inexplicable. The protagonist is a pure human. His soul does not have the martial soul of the dragon clan and he is not a dragon. The protagonist dares to go in. It is fine if he is not regarded as an enemy by the dragon soul inside. He also gives you dragon bones and dragon tears. Why do you think that the dragon clan will give you resources? It is okay if they don't unite to beat the protagonist. After all, Tang Wulin of the Dou San family still has the blood of the Golden Dragon King. The protagonist, a pure human, dares to break in with his body that has not yet reached the god level. He also calls it looking for dragon bones to find resources. He purely forcibly sets up halo and creates a sect. The protagonist's sect is basically the second Shrek. Only people from all over the world who want to join the protagonist's sect can cultivate the subsequent realm. This is not pure and pure like Shrek. Unification is not allowed, so he just stays and continues to fight. He has to occupy the pit and not shit. There is also the setting of the Dragon King. It's pure random writing and the dragon will give birth to nine sons. The nine dragon kings are all the sons and daughters of the dragon god. I just want to ask the author if you have read the original work. If so, why do you think the overall route is the same as in the original work? If not, how could you come up with this setting? The dragon god is the supreme god king, and the nine dragon kings are subordinates. All of them are god-king level. The dragon nine sons you wrote are just mentally ill. Also, as mentioned before, I am too lazy to complain about the combat power. Even the ice and fire dragon king has been dead for many years, and the remaining souls can have god-level power. As one of the clones of the Dragon God, the Silver Dragon King is at least a God-King. Even if he takes a stab from Shura and needs to recuperate, he will fall to the first-level God. The Silver Dragon King you write is cut into a dog. He has a priest-level strength and can explode with God-King-level strength with all his strength. After the explosion, a God King is cut by Shura, who is also a God-King. I can't understand the realm, I can't understand the emotional scenes, and there's no logic at all. The whole book is full of poisonous points.

The author's name should not be Jiang Nannan, and Wang Dong is originally a dog leash. If you want it, don't you bring it yourself? How is this different from the original protagonist? It's just that there is no one to control Xiaoxiao and Pingchuan. There is nothing. Give him another classroom. I think that old woman Zhou is very unhappy. His martial spirit is originally a waste martial spirit, and she said that other people's martial arts are useless. Believe me, if you change this, your reputation will be publicized. Many people will come to see why I can't find you for free for three days. Your reputation has not been publicized. I will give you five stars to change the dormitory. Don't let that little bastard succeed. What you write must be reasonable and don't collapse.