
About This Novel
You should already know the protagonist from the title of the book. Two souls in one body but not twin martial souls The blood-weeping sword in the left hand, the snow-abandoning sword in the right hand (no typo) single heroine Penguin colony: 823247254
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Official(153)Scraped 4d ago
Finish spreading flowers
I'm honored to see a good fan novel. In today's world where the system is rampant and multiple female protagonists are prevalent, it is not easy to persist to the completion without following these two routes. As a reader who has been involved in various fan novels all year round, I can give a fair evaluation of this work. Although it is not an eye-catching surprise, it also gives people the motivation to pursue it patiently. I hope you can work harder in the future to achieve self-improvement and development.
Good
But what kind of god will the protagonist become? I feel that the Shura God's position is really suitable for the protagonist. After all, he was killed in Blood Clothes.
The introduction says she is a single female protagonist?
Since there is only one female protagonist, don't keep saying that so and so likes the protagonist. Isn't it disgusting?
Don't take my love for you as the reason why you don't renew it,
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Another way to write about dog licking, or hard licking, why don't you believe it, you give me grass for no reason, don't be stubborn with me, you are really attracting fire, and you have a lot of brains. Tang San would have been exposed in the competition, just to write about hard licking to attract fire, but he gave me grass for free, and he said it was like farting, saying that he didn't have an affair with a woman, but in the end, haha, he was really just talking and farting.
The book is very good, and it is different from ordinary fan fiction, but there are some flaws in the emotional scenes. It can be said that I can't understand why the male and female protagonists are so confused in love, and the male protagonist's personality is also a bit different. If these are written well, it will be more perfect.
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It is strongly recommended to equip the Xue Yi Hou with a mount, and it must be of high quality.
The writing style is slightly lacking, but I hope the author will keep up the good work! Come on Aoli!
The book is very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I hope the author will become a doctoral student in the future and continue to write this novel. I can't help but curse here. 3Shao is really not a thing. He flips the table after eating and makes himself miserable. He doesn't give others a way to survive. Everyone knows the strongest anti-routine. Buyi was used by 3shao to stir up the book. The book was sealed for a long time and almost disappeared. Does he deserve to eat like him? Nausea!
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Community(0)
Official(153)Scraped 4d ago
Finish spreading flowers
I'm honored to see a good fan novel. In today's world where the system is rampant and multiple female protagonists are prevalent, it is not easy to persist to the completion without following these two routes. As a reader who has been involved in various fan novels all year round, I can give a fair evaluation of this work. Although it is not an eye-catching surprise, it also gives people the motivation to pursue it patiently. I hope you can work harder in the future to achieve self-improvement and development.
Good
But what kind of god will the protagonist become? I feel that the Shura God's position is really suitable for the protagonist. After all, he was killed in Blood Clothes.
The introduction says she is a single female protagonist?
Since there is only one female protagonist, don't keep saying that so and so likes the protagonist. Isn't it disgusting?
Don't take my love for you as the reason why you don't renew it,
Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update
Another way to write about dog licking, or hard licking, why don't you believe it, you give me grass for no reason, don't be stubborn with me, you are really attracting fire, and you have a lot of brains. Tang San would have been exposed in the competition, just to write about hard licking to attract fire, but he gave me grass for free, and he said it was like farting, saying that he didn't have an affair with a woman, but in the end, haha, he was really just talking and farting.
The book is very good, and it is different from ordinary fan fiction, but there are some flaws in the emotional scenes. It can be said that I can't understand why the male and female protagonists are so confused in love, and the male protagonist's personality is also a bit different. If these are written well, it will be more perfect.
Make a suggestion
It is strongly recommended to equip the Xue Yi Hou with a mount, and it must be of high quality.
The writing style is slightly lacking, but I hope the author will keep up the good work! Come on Aoli!
The book is very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I hope the author will become a doctoral student in the future and continue to write this novel. I can't help but curse here. 3Shao is really not a thing. He flips the table after eating and makes himself miserable. He doesn't give others a way to survive. Everyone knows the strongest anti-routine. Buyi was used by 3shao to stir up the book. The book was sealed for a long time and almost disappeared. Does he deserve to eat like him? Nausea!
















