Douluo's Spiritual Treasure Douluo

I feel like this book is nonsense, some settings are pieced together, the writing is not good enough, the excitement is not enough, and the main character does not need to have the mentality of a holy mother, he always likes to help others.

Collect Qian Renxue, lick Bibi Dong and fight Qian Daoliu? The combat power of the Enshrinement Hall is on Qian Renxue's side. You want to help Qian Renxue fight against Bibi Dong, but in the end you keep beating the people in the Enshrinement Hall and licking Bibi Dong's people. It's really 6

Why do you just participate in the competition and get nothing? You get it faster than a licking dog. It's really not expensive and you can lick it enough.

I just read one and stopped reading. The reason is: Tang San has practiced for several years before his first-level combat power reached the level of a hundred-year-old spirit beast. You can directly fight a thousand-year-old spirit beast. Are you writing an invincible article? 2 When you wear it, you collect witchcraft and spells on earth? You directly say that you have experience in other fantasy worlds or have a system or something. 3. Your name is too down-to-earth. Your book is not suitable for writing about Douluo. Isn't it good to write about Douluo?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is too vicious!

After get off work, he said that the writing is pretty good so far. As long as he doesn't lick Tang San or the Master in the future, this book is still worth reading. Does this book have a female protagonist? The harem story is better.

The true fire of samadhi spewed out from the precious gourd

Let me list a few shortcomings first. If you can accept it, this book should be pretty good. 1. First of all, the protagonist's name is very perfunctory and unpleasant. The supporting characters are all named Zhou Yuan and Zhou Shan. These names are better than the protagonist's. So is it so difficult to change the name? Isn't it good that the main character is called Zhou Yuan and the supporting character is called Tuesday? 2. Basically every picture has some ink-stained paragraphs. Things that can be explained clearly in one sentence must be divided into two or three paragraphs. It doesn't matter if you write like this when it is free, but who knows what you will write when it is put on the shelves. If you still write like this on the shelves, wouldn't it be a waste of time? What I want to see is the protagonist and the supporting characters. I don't care at all. I have no sense of expectation. Even if they get a soul ring, I have to write three or four chapters. Isn't that a waste of time? 3. When the Wuhun awakens, there is an obvious plot to reduce intelligence. I can see that the author does not want the protagonists to take the route of Wuhun Palace, but there is another way to write that they will not enter the Wuhun Palace. Do you have to use this method of forcibly reducing intelligence to prevent them from entering? If the protagonists and the others are said to be useless Wuhuns, then all the continents will be useless Wuhuns. , Let's take the person who awakened the martial soul, he is a level 32 soul master. Considering that he is a soul master at his age, when he awakened his soul power, that is, he was at level 2~4. There are three protagonists, one is at level six, one is at level eight, and one is at full soul power. How could he be said to be a useless martial soul? Moreover, according to the setting of Douluo Continent, no martial soul has power without a soul ring. The above is the shortcomings I have summarized in my opinion. If you can accept it, the author's writing style and the protagonist's IQ are still good. I saw Zhou Yuan and Zhou Shan discard the soul rings after they obtained them.

This book is not written to my liking

Please don't lick it, okay? It really doesn't look like licking, but when you look at it, it feels like licking. I really don't want to see this kind of thing, really.