The Fire Ancestor of the Martial Universe

I feel that Lin Yan has too much inner drama and is a bit long-winded. It would be much more convenient to see him light a fire with his bare hands, just like a lighter (•‾̑⌣‾̑•)✧˖

The shortcoming of this book is that the protagonist has too much inner drama. The second shortcoming is that this book is 100% a harem story. I guarantee it, okay. Later readers, if the author continues to write, or writes it until it is almost finished, come and criticize me if you are not convinced, okay. Come and criticize me if you are not convinced. It is 100% a harem story. The protagonist is so coquettish.

You just make up the word count if you don't write well. I'm really speechless. He is a modern person and has no modern imagination at all. Like the author, you also have nine years of compulsory political education. This is also 68 on the best-seller list

The protagonist Lin Yan = Tang San's shortcomings + Xiao Yan's shortcomings. Even if the plot is slow, the key point is that the character of the protagonist is disgusting.

(Don't ask about the reading time, this is a trumpet.) It is said that there are three golden chapters, but my cultivation level is not enough and I have been poisoned. Don't say that if you don't like it, you can leave and leave comments here. He wrote it just for people to read, so why can't he comment? The author wrote it to make money, and the ratings affect its best-seller value. But the writing is not good, so why do you want to brag about it without thinking? Also, even if the author deletes the review, the rating record will still be there. The worst thing is to get a few more accounts and comment more times.

The main reason is that the author's writing skills are not good and he can't write emotional dramas. He keeps writing there. As long as you write about cultivation in the first few dozen chapters and then add some emotional dramas later, even if your writing skills are not good, this book will be better. The beginning of your book is basically all emotional dramas, and you don't know how to write. It's embarrassing to read.

If it's updated, I'll keep it. If it's not updated, I'll delete it. I don't keep useless books on my bookshelf. Although it's a bit ugly to say it, that's the fact.

The protagonist's time travel in a car accident proves that we are in modern times. Since we are modern people, we don't need to be too strict about our moves, martial arts, and abilities. We have always seen anime, right? Since you are playing with fire, Yamamoto Genryusai and Ace can refer to it. You don't need to make the Buddha's Furious Fire Lotus at every turn. The ninety-six swords of Po Dao are cremated to understand. Although the Death God Po Dao is not used, but the strange fire has been conquered and you can't use it as you like? The moves can be used, and the Fire Release in Naruto can be used as a reference. The Rasengan is just that the chakra is replaced by the energy in the martial arts, and it is inseparable from it. There is no need to form seals or chant anything, since the alien fire has been conquered, it can be used as it pleases.

As far as Lin Yan has watched Wu Dong Qiankun in advance, it is like predicting the future and being able to achieve his goals before the original plot happens. This is also a kind of golden finger.

I feel like my intelligence has been insulted.