
Imperial Summoner
by Eunuch Zhao
About This Novel
After traveling to another world, I discovered that I could actually use the power of the heroes in the League of Legends! Riven... Weapon Master... Piltover policewoman... Angel of Justice... ...
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Official(4)Scraped 4d ago
Opinion column of primary school students
1. The front is a little boring, but the description is detailed 2. Moreover, the pace is a bit slow at the beginning, which is harmless. 3. The biggest feeling after reading a few chapters is that the capital letters are very detailed. 4. This is just my personal experience from the reader's perspective; the above opinions may also be due to my lack of understanding of this aspect, hahahaha, I will follow up later! ! ! Finally, come on, little brother.
The protagonist is too naive and takes things for granted
I don't know how old the protagonist was when he time traveled. He is not calm at all. He thinks things subjectively and does not understand the world yet. He is so high-profile and arrogant. Although the author can add settings to the villain's intelligence, this forced and reasonable approach is very childish. As soon as he appears, he despises official duties and despises the court. Does the protagonist understand the court? Do you know Guan Cha? Do you know his character? Although the personal settings were added later, it is not real at all. It's like I can do whatever I want as long as I label you a villain. Then everything I do is correct. Also, the things bought at the inn are expensive. The protagonists all know that the inn is similar to a highway rest area, so the fees are definitely not cheap. Taking into account the freight and store costs, the thing at the train station and airport is not three to five times higher. Can the train station be destroyed by the airport? As for the purchasing power of copper coins, the protagonist has never bought anything and has no money. How can he know the purchasing power of copper coins in this world? There is no reference. And it is different in ancient and modern times. Has the protagonist thought that maybe it is not that things are expensive, but that they earn less money? Ordinary people only earn a few bucks from farming. How much can the most prosperous people earn? How much can officials earn? Make its logic and thinking reasonable, let readers see more of the world inside, instead of just watching the protagonist pretending to be cool, and everything else is empty. Only in this way can there be a sense of substitution. Otherwise, it will be like watching a junior high school student write a diary. Please improve it.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 4d ago
Opinion column of primary school students
1. The front is a little boring, but the description is detailed 2. Moreover, the pace is a bit slow at the beginning, which is harmless. 3. The biggest feeling after reading a few chapters is that the capital letters are very detailed. 4. This is just my personal experience from the reader's perspective; the above opinions may also be due to my lack of understanding of this aspect, hahahaha, I will follow up later! ! ! Finally, come on, little brother.
The protagonist is too naive and takes things for granted
I don't know how old the protagonist was when he time traveled. He is not calm at all. He thinks things subjectively and does not understand the world yet. He is so high-profile and arrogant. Although the author can add settings to the villain's intelligence, this forced and reasonable approach is very childish. As soon as he appears, he despises official duties and despises the court. Does the protagonist understand the court? Do you know Guan Cha? Do you know his character? Although the personal settings were added later, it is not real at all. It's like I can do whatever I want as long as I label you a villain. Then everything I do is correct. Also, the things bought at the inn are expensive. The protagonists all know that the inn is similar to a highway rest area, so the fees are definitely not cheap. Taking into account the freight and store costs, the thing at the train station and airport is not three to five times higher. Can the train station be destroyed by the airport? As for the purchasing power of copper coins, the protagonist has never bought anything and has no money. How can he know the purchasing power of copper coins in this world? There is no reference. And it is different in ancient and modern times. Has the protagonist thought that maybe it is not that things are expensive, but that they earn less money? Ordinary people only earn a few bucks from farming. How much can the most prosperous people earn? How much can officials earn? Make its logic and thinking reasonable, let readers see more of the world inside, instead of just watching the protagonist pretending to be cool, and everything else is empty. Only in this way can there be a sense of substitution. Otherwise, it will be like watching a junior high school student write a diary. Please improve it.
















