Holographic Fantasy

First of all, as a bookworm who considers himself to have read a lot of books, I carefully read this book from Chapter 1 to the latest updated chapter. I can clearly find that from the first chapter, it feels like the author is writing a running account. The character story starts off poorly, but later on the plot is compact and emotional. In fact, the author is honing his writing skills little by little. When I read the latest chapters, I clearly felt the author's intentions. I roughly summarized it. Each of the big characters is very vivid, with distinct emotions and joys. But the character Qin Huai is really unpopular. He is too rational and realistic, and the behavior of the heroine Lun Bai is incomprehensible. The heroine can be cold, heartless, or socially fearful, but she can't seem to have no goals and do things as she pleases. The technical PK and dungeon exploration in the game are very well written, allowing me to see the legacy of the fireworks at that time. It's not that I'm plagiarizing it, but I think it's been a long time since I saw this style of technical flow, and I miss it a bit. It is better for game articles to have a larger proportion of dungeon, PK, and exploration content. This makes everyone feel comfortable. If there are too many intrigues in stories about families, federations, and parliaments, it will be very tiring to watch. You must know that this is a novel about a holographic game connecting to another real world. The background is complex enough, and there is a lot that can be written about in depth. Finally, I think the biggest problem is that the story at the beginning is really speechless. As a result, when I look at the direction of the story later, I always have the feeling that no matter how you write it, you can't fill the sinkhole you created for yourself at the beginning. PS, although I think this book is still very good, it has a lot of flaws.

It turns out that the heroine was killed by a male protagonist, and after being reborn, she ended up marrying the man who killed her in her previous life. Simply superb. No matter how misunderstood, it is a fact that I was killed by that man.

When I saw the end of the second chapter, I wanted to criticize it. The female protagonist was killed and reborn as a dead woman. Why are you giving Qin so many explanations? Just explain that he is the male protagonist. Faint. . Even if the heroine in the previous generation went crazy because of another heroine, it was the result of Qin Huai's laissez-faire. . Bad review. . Simply. .

Author, if you write holograms well, why can't the heroine be clear about it? I don't even have a good impression of this book. For me, the beginning is uncomfortable, and no matter how good the writing is, it will still carry the same emotion as the beginning, which is very unpleasant. As many people have said, people's initial goodwill is very important. [Emot=default,01/]It's so depressing. . . . .

This heroine is simply poisonous! Such a holy mother

I haven't read holograms for a long time. After reading the copy, I decided to add the bookshelf first. The settings are really interesting, including the system's balance mechanism and career settings, etc. Now that I have seen the chapter of heroes, I really can't help but want to complain about it. The first three chapters should be the story that cuts into the plot, but I was almost persuaded to abandon it, not because it was cliche, but because the plot changed too suddenly. The attitude of the heroine, especially in the "Goodbye" chapter, actually made people feel very happy. After all, it was a restart. There was no need to confine yourself to the original circle. Being able to have a completely new direction is what is so cool about a setting like rebirth. But the further you go, the more confusing it becomes. Although you can understand that work and friendship cannot be cut off directly, business can also be done. The character Qin Huai said at the beginning that he was too rational, which is true, but it can be seen that this character's character is actually quite controlling, and his relationship with the heroine is obviously higher. But now that the heroine has decided to take a new path and become a free player, her attitude is not like this. After reading two hundred chapters, the profession and route are all good, but she still feels stuck in the previous life. Indeed, the golden finger brought by rebirth is very useful, and even her own race and profession are golden fingers. But based on these alone, it is obviously impossible to become the free and the number one player in online games as the heroine said. The heroine has done a good job in planning the career of the archer, but holographic games, skills and body skills should also be very important. Apart from the initial mention that the skills in the previous life were very good, there is not much more involved. As for the golden finger, the heroine also seems to be too open-minded, which is actually more dangerous. According to the heroine's ability as a chief analyst, her behavior is obviously not up to her due performance. Social fear is more reflected in low emotional intelligence. Communication with people always seems a bit awkward, especially with Qin Huai. I looked at the comment section and saw that the character Qin Huai was the male protagonist. I didn't expect it, but after I found out that he had a lot of roles, I didn't think it was too surprising. I was just a little helpless. In the first few chapters, whether it was what happened or the attitude of the heroine, it was obvious that the line had to be completely drawn, but it was no longer like this later. I don't know if the heroine is not strong enough and still has illusions in this regard. The part about dreaming about Qin Huai was really a bit embarrassing. However, excluding Qin Huai, other characters are still very vivid, such as Luoying Colorful, and the female characters that the heroine encounters successively. They are all well-shaped, and the game gives people a strong sense of expectation. In the holographic online game article, there are many settings about the impact of the game on reality. If it is well written, it will be very attractive. In particular, the author's settings for the game are quite detailed. The balance mechanism is well written, but he directly emphasizes it every time. It is not discovered by the heroine, such as the luck value and the ring of misfortune. I feel that the heroine as the chief analyst should be more sensitive to such things in the name, and the balance mechanism can also be written from the side, instead of directly saying that the system is balanced because the heroine speeds up a certain process. So far, the heroine's path has been smooth, but since the balance mechanism exists, it is too smooth when it comes to fighting bosses. In fact, if the system is automatically balanced according to the settings, there will be many changes under the butterfly effect of the heroine, not just in the heroine's equipment or attribute values. I don't know if this is the author's subsequent setting to complete it, but this setting is really great. I hope the follow-up can be more exciting.

The heroine is such a holy mother, friendship is priceless, haha, I have known you for a few days, who do you know in real life?

I'm a little confused, why did the heroine give that information to Qin Huai in the first place? And there should be no closed beta players in this game, right? The heroine has been called a closed beta player in the early days. What if the mastermind finds out? Won't the mastermind get to the bottom of it?

I just saw a comment saying that this article is a technical flow holographic article, and it mentioned an author I quite like, Back then Fireworks. I especially like technical flow holographic articles, and it is rare to see good articles nowadays. But I probably won't read this article, because the comments said that the emotional aspect is not very good. I personally care about a better emotional drama. I don't ask for how many emotional dramas I can write, just a little is good. I hope the author can persevere, practice his writing better, and write a better beginning in the future. I like technical flow holography, so I support you. Internet articles generally start well, giving people different feelings Today I happened to want to see if there were any holographic articles about technology, and I found it. Nowadays, there are very few technology articles about holographic online games. There are so many thieves, koi is the favorite of the group, but the technology is not necessarily that good. It's not easy for me to give up after seeing a few pictures.

I don't know why it looks weird.