When I Woke Up, I Activated the Bai Fumei System

I came in to take a look because of the limited exemption. Just like a previous reader complained, the beginning has an ancient taste. But you write modern literature, and it's system flow, so... Regarding the heroine's character, considering that I have only read the first four chapters, to be honest, I can't feel the highlights and it doesn't grab me at all. It's normal for me to run away. But the author's writing is not difficult to read. I think it's just that the writing style is too green, the plot is old-fashioned, and the characters are not likeable. But! I have to say but again! The introduction is a bit attractive to me, otherwise I wouldn't click in to read it. It's not like you don't have money and skills to do sports, but it is very attractive to me (as a fat, lazy and ugly person). One thing I always feel is that, as the author, you don't know how to write poetry, and the plot progresses too fast. For example, when the heroine's appearance was restored, the author wrote it too hastily and simply. In the first few chapters, the author has accomplished a point that could obviously lead to dozens of chapters and attract readers. Many readers decide whether to read this book within a few chapters, and even more capable readers can tell in the first two chapters. Should you consider revising the first few chapters? Ahem, I think the author's future is still bright. I gave it five stars because I believe that the author will one day be able to write a good article worthy of these five stars. The above are all personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them.

I struggled to read the first 30 chapters, and they were full of flaws. I felt like the heroine felt invincible once she had the system. She was pretentious, and the language description was awkward. There are really not many novels that make me complain. This one really convinced me and left me speechless. . .

Sorry, two chapters of this book have been blocked. I have revised it several times but failed to pass the review. I will work hard to revise it.

The heroine looks at me so embarrassed

The author will update quickly.

Looks awkward, so good, with a bit of foreign style

The author does not like to watch male videos I just wrote male videos Is my guess right?

The character of the heroine is very disappointing. She thinks that if she has a system, that's all. It's too unrealistic and overbearing.

This book is very well written. I liked it very much at first, but the more I read it, the more it seemed a bit bloody and violent. The author has a very rich imagination. Maybe I don't like that kind of violence. I still hope that the author will work hard, and I will do it!

The heroine gives me a murderous feeling, my god