My Body Disobeys Me

After looking at the standard loser flow at the beginning, the lack of control over the body should be the main selling point, and it is also the golden finger that emerges in the later stage. The arrangement of the forward movement is reasonable. It is good to show that the body is not under control at the beginning, but there are some redundancies that could be simplified a bit. There are a lot of jokes about see-through clothes in the front. The later story about the origins of becoming useless is also well explained, and the description of the battle in Chapter 3 is good. Personally, I feel that it would be better if the cheat could be used as the core element of a comeback in combat if the body could not be controlled, so that readers would be more aware of the existence of the cheat. In terms of sentences, the overall writing is acceptable, but conjunctions are often piled up, making it a bit difficult to read.