Rebuilding the Former Knights

Rebuilding the Former Knights

by Buffet Pickled Fish

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About This Novel

"Captain, please stop poking at Sister Fiona." "Captain, why did you call Sister Joan of Arc France? Where is France?" "Captain, you are sneaking around with Sister Claire again. Sister Liesel is going to be angry." "Captain? Commander, where are you?" ............ Wright, who had just fled to the Valar continent, met a little girl, but was regarded as their former leader. During the trip, he retrieved the female knights of the knights one after another, the heroic Lisela, the gentle and sinister Fiona, the quirky Claire... In the process, Wright gradually realized that he was really their leader...

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Star Flame72mo ago

good

It's very well written, keep it up! Come on! Come on!

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Kisaragi Changing Clothes72mo ago

It's a bit interesting, but if you write it like this, the plot will be about daily life and finding someone, right? There can be more small interactions in daily life, so that it will be interesting to watch and it will not end quickly.

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Los70mo ago

some suggestions

This book imitates the search for the lost ship girl, but changes the background, which is good grammar. I hope the author will not stick to the story of the ship girl book. After all, the backgrounds are different and the space for play is different. The emotional line and details should also be carefully paved, and the outline should not be too imitated from other books. After all, scholars will die if they imitate. The period is still good, if you like the follow-up performance, it can be even better.

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E=mc²71mo ago

This book is so good, why doesn't anyone read it?

Good book, but not many people read it.

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