Devouring the Starry Sky Incense Shinto

I don't understand at all why the author wants to collect monsters during the warrior assessment. There are hidden cameras throughout the process. Isn't the protagonist looking for death? The next day, I could go to the wilderness area and wander around, but I had to show off my lower IQ during the warrior assessment. This is no longer something that can be explained by the mentally retarded.

As long as the author is an individual, he will not write in this way. Invincible gold ring, do this and do that. I remember that golden ring, it seemed that as long as you had that faith, you could create anything, and you could create it out of thin air. Then what else needs to be added to be invincible? For example, if you have not become a warrior, then you can buy ordinary life and then become a warrior. After reaching the third level of apprentice, you can go to the wild, and then first capture the first and second level apprentices, and then after becoming the sixth level apprentice, you can capture the 12345 ones. After becoming an apprentice at the ninth level, you can grab anyone who is below the ninth level, and from the planet level onwards, you can grab anyone who is below the planet level. Later, the dog reached the star level, and the star level captured all the monsters above level 3 of the apprentices on the earth. Then they will reach the Universe level in a few months at most. After the Universe level is repaired, they will go to the Universe level to buy random slaves, then to the World Lord level, and then buy random slaves from a few galaxies. Isn't that casual? Not to mention the Immortal Lord Lord of the Universe behind him. Then ask the Lord of the Universe to create hundreds of millions of epochs. Then the front is the true god, the true god, and then dragged to the back of the original universe for great destruction, at least he can become the master or the king of gods. Then when you get to the Origin Continent, you are considered a high-level person. The Origin Continent also operates similarly. If the golden ring is the ultimate mirror, then we will have to wait until the original world is destroyed to directly control the entire continent of origin with faith to become world-class. Then write about how he used incense and Shinto to achieve success as a lord. Or his upper limit is high and he can reach the lord level. That is directly invincible. The core word count issue can reach several million if you write more and go through the process. If I were asked to write, I would definitely not be able to write it, but if the author is so bad at writing this, you can write so much. I said that the process of writing is relatively good, and this will definitely earn millions. And the heat is definitely higher than yours. A devouring fan novel about a world that believes in becoming an invincible god was written by you into a dog-licking and mindless flow novel. Except for that kind of readers, other readers don't like this kind of novel. This kind of writing is too that.

**It's a piece of cake, so many mistakes, I won't mention them, and no common sense at all! What the hell is this plot? Forcibly connecting with Li Yao, and not killing him, but suddenly a Hong appears, and Hong is Li Yao's father! Then protect him, do you have any brains? Others chased the protagonist like a dog, but the protagonist let him go for one trillion earth coins. What kind of fanfic are you writing? Go to hell you! It makes me sick!

1. The size of the golden finger space is 5 meters for one time and 100 meters for another. I also thought that 5 meters would only feed two nests of ants at most, but the next chapter turned into 100 meters. 2. Collect monsters from the warrior assessment. There are cameras all over the assessment town, so it's hard to understand your sweet operation. 3. The martial arts school gave out money to buy monster pets. Obviously you can develop it by visiting the wild area, but if you just buy it and just check it, you will be useless. 4. Cat with nine lives. Those who are not from my race must have different minds. A king-level monster will play house with you, and the monsters you treat as humans are like a family. I saw that I couldn't stand it anymore.

Hong is a good guy, why don't you kill Li Yao when he comes? Hong has been kneeling down and kowtowing to you for several months, so you still want to give him face? He's nothing but a piece of cake. He's not going to die anyway. You're really speechless.

The gold ring of this protagonist can at least become the ultimate god king. If the gold ring is more powerful, it can become world-class. And then you are crazy about being a licking dog. Lord Luo Feng can't help the ultimate, let alone if he is stronger, he will be world-class. I'm really convinced. No wonder it's so low in popularity and has so many bad reviews. If I join Virtual Universe later, I'll be even more talented among talents. . Obviously, just pull the living body in. The protagonist should buy the gold ring at the beginning and buy those ordinary lives to get up later, and then stay in the wild to become a star before coming out. Later, he went to the universe to directly buy apprentices and planet-level slaves like crazy, and then he rose up and became a world master. Then slaves below the universe level can't be bought casually? Wouldn't it be casual to become a Venerable and a life below immortality? If you insist on writing it this way, Luo Feng's journey of being a dog-licker is like turning the invincible gold ring into a dog-like operation.

I didn't want to read the first two chapters. A chicken costs more than a thousand dollars. In the original book, ordinary people only earn a few thousand dollars a month. Even though they clearly know that the Lord of the universe can go back in time, they still speak carelessly. A place with a diameter of five meters told me that it is an oasis. This is a small puddle!

Trash, nothing to look at. So fucking rubbish.

The imagination is okay, but the writing is lagging behind. The plot logic is not rigorous and full of loopholes. It seems that the text is written on the fly. Various bugs can be seen when setting up and using the golden finger. Just set it in the front, and then disappear immediately. All kinds of data are just written in the head. The specific calculation of the incense value is extremely vague. Anyway, a group of monsters are suddenly installed, and then the incense value keeps rising, emmm. Then I don't want to comment on some of the conflicts or self-interest plots designed. I can only say that the author should work hard and hope to continue to improve and become a master of online writing. After all, this is free for members, so the requirements are not high.

What a fucking rubbish of rubbish. Real rubbish.