Summer of Retrospect

The author of this article has a tendency to become addicted to pornography, which has already caused an uproar. However, he is still arrogant, and it is estimated that he will commit more crimes later.

I accept your flowers and water≠I accept you. This is a sign of kindness😘If you can accept this kind of heroine's strong recommendation, continue reading

After meeting Bai Congdong, the plot was completely written down, and Bai Congdong was looking forward to the reunion plot. The writing is really average, it's really high and low. It's obvious that the author has messed up. You can't write well like this. I suggest you scrap and rewrite the previous 123 chapters. It's better than scribbling and revising.

The plot at the beginning is very emotional, but the rest is just so-so. The meeting after returning home from Dong is ordinary, and the meeting of sister Qingyue from Dong is ordinary. It is ordinary and I like to break it up. To be honest, the plot that I have been waiting for for so long is so bland that I am speechless. What is the point of stopping in a place like this? That's it. Anyway, you like to delete comments. I don't know how long my comments will be available. Although I didn't spend much money, reading a book for the first time made me feel like I was taken advantage of.

From the last novel to The Eunuch to this one, bro, stop writing novels and go to the factory to drive screws. A beginning without an end means nothing. You won't make any great achievements in this life. You will eat whatever you can't do and nothing will be left. Your writing skills will be wasted.

This book is also super beautiful. I just said why this writing style is so familiar to me I asked why it is so to my liking, It's you who forgives, I have been waiting since December 23 until now Are you finally willing to write?

The character of the sister in this book has been ruined. I don't recommend reading it. I was very optimistic about it. You can read the details in the post forum. Originally, it was fine to change a small thing and apologize or not to change the character. However, the plot has been greatly changed and the character has been changed. Forget the previous criticisms, you still have a tough mouth. It can be seen that you changed the plot to save the sister's character, but in the end, the plot collapsed.

It was clearly written well at the beginning, but later on a younger sister appeared, and another Li Qingyue appeared. Then after we reunited, I felt that Dongqiu was indispensable. What a deviation from the beginning. Since it is not so important, why should I write it so regretfully at the beginning? I was completely confused.

Taking on a younger brother when a dispute arises is an essential element of a clichéd campus novel. After all, the protagonist is silent, and the default is equal to consent. Of course, if there are some that are valuable, just keep them. As for this kind of hard-on, it's very old-fashioned. I can change it if I want, just the last one or two chapters. If it is not changed, it will greatly affect the experience. If someone calls you, you will acquiesce. I am here to show that the author also thinks so. Is it annoying to have a mosquito next to my ear every day? The early and middle stages are all fine, just the last few chapters. What are you playing for? Did you get into a dispute, then find out that the other party is very powerful, and then beg the boss non-stop. It was taken down inexplicably, and after all, you didn't refuse. Increased inclusivity. It's like you bully someone, only to find out that you can't bully someone and then become their boss. But that doesn't change who you are as a human being. This fact. Then I didn't refuse and got in touch with him. Oops, could it be that the same kind of people gather together? Don't say you can't get rid of it. I'm so young, aren't the three of them buried somewhere?

I haven't read on QQ for a long time. I will give you one star when I come back.