The Dead Otaku is so Awesome

Why don't you stay at home anymore? Why don't you stay at home anymore? What are you doing? What are you doing?

Don't think that you can attract readers by using the second dimension. If you write poorly, no one will read it.

The rebirth plus system has no opinion at all? How old you were before you were reborn, but now you still write like a child.

The author may think that there is nothing wrong with the character you wrote yourself, but the character design of Akari Tachibana looks quite disgusting. Also, the protagonist's previous character design still only liked two-dimensional otakus. You also want to have more female protagonists. You are thinking about pooping. The plot of each female character. , The presence of other female characters immediately disappeared, and then there were plots where the female characters appeared to either attract favor or disgust people. After watching it for most of the time, I remembered Moonlight and the disgusting Tachibana Akari, and forgot about the others. It wrote a shitty harem, and the characters and plot distribution were not done well.

In some cases, you don't need to write the protagonist's name. Just cook a dish for the protagonist. The protagonist's name appears almost twenty times. It's too embarrassing.

Sizhai Steamed Goose Heart Sizhai Steamed Goose Heart

The settings are pretty good (referring to the plug-ins being very powerful), and it feels like you're at your peak when you appear. In the early stage, the plot was scattered and developed on multiple lines (the scene was skipped inexplicably, and I didn't recognize it yet). From the back, it seems that the introduction is buried in advance, and it covers dozens of chapters, but it can be clearly seen. The writing style is average, but in hindsight, the writing power could be improved. Although the subject matter is relatively niche, the rating should not be so low.

Just a word from someone and you go to school. Are you an otaku and your system is out of order? I will definitely stay with this system forever, so I can just come out and show off occasionally. And what's the point of going to school for you? Be a useful person to the world? Bad review of this school drama

The author writes about a dead house system, but he just helps his father cook, helps his stepsister make lunches, and goes to comic exhibitions

I felt that not only was it not good, but most of the early stage was about how awesome the male protagonist was, which made me very unhappy and made my mood worse.