Reincarnation Paradise: the Crucible

There was a comment in the comment area that in the first few worlds, the protagonist was a black dragon slayer, a sect slayer, and a god slayer, but he couldn't get the world treasure chest. The author's reply was that the protagonist's independent participation was not enough or something, so it couldn't reach 150%. As a result, in the latest mutant world, after defeating Lao Wan and Phoenix, after defeating Dark Phoenix and then killing Apocalypse, and after killing Apocalypse, the mutants were able to establish a nation, and there were only two or three reincarnators, big cats and kittens, that survived. Even though they were all like this, they still only had 117%. Does this mean that the protagonist has to defeat the whole world alone in order to reach 150%? There are also seeds of the world. The reason why they are not cohesive is that the protagonist is afraid that after being sold to the seventh level, he will be like a child holding gold bricks in the city. Isn't it too funny? The protagonist is not a native, but a blacksmith master invited by the brigade. Why not try to make a deal with the brigade who knows the details? If you don't join, you can't even trade? The Outland system has been paid attention to by the park, and the park has specially given Fen Jue to the protagonist. Other fans are blocked by the group leader. Why did your protagonist just give you an invitation letter and then disappear? Isn't this because I don't want to write that the protagonist gets a lot of resources and takes off immediately, so I deliberately suppress it?

The current progress is the progress of finishing the first world and returning to the park. I would like to make a small suggestion. The descriptions of various transportation, dining and entertainment in the park can be as little as possible. You can say that in other parks, it is okay. In the eyes of other parks, there may be some for the reincarnation park of Madman's Paradise, but not much. There is no need to over-describe these things. Most of the fans who read the park have read the original work. You can see that the latter ones are more like the kind of battle of wits and courage with old coins, and start a fight if they disagree. The park can have additional descriptions, but not too much. If there are too many, it will appear that this reincarnation paradise has no reincarnation. Secondly, in addition to the health value, you can try to count the attributes such as strength, physical strength, and intelligence that are burned in the furnace to the settlement interface. Return to the paradise and decide when to add them based on your personal wishes. Because if you increase the talent level but cannot move up the own level, what should you do with the attribute barrier? To break or not to break? If it is broken, you are half a violator. If not, the resources to improve your talent are wasted.

Suppress the protagonist! The trial world wiped out a large race and killed a god. The source of the world was still less than 100%. It is unimaginable that there are no people in Paradise who can obtain the Seed of the World. Wouldn't it be necessary to massacre the world at the first level, or kill the overlord at the third level?

The second-level trial mission world is too long, look at what Mosquito wrote. Most readers come here to watch unlimited streaming plots. Don't write such a long copy of this original low-drama plot for the first time. You won't want to read it after less than half of it.

I think the author is like this kind of second creation, and the original work can only be used as a reference, instead of directly copying it for the sake of ease, removing the protagonist of the original work and making it his own pseudo-protagonist. Because the original work is already a successful work, if you copy what he did, it is equivalent to eating it once, and you eat it again, which is not interesting. We should develop some original works, and those details that are not there, such as a big story of Gu Zhenren, there will be many small stories as a foil. In short, we need to borrow its big framework, and then use his unfinished small stories, and combine it with some of the stories that we have created, modify and add to the parts where the framework is not perfect, and write our own things. In other words, we can learn from it in the early stage and then slowly modify it and finally let it become its own shape. In short, it is said that green comes from blue, and green comes from blue.

Chapter 1 entry: A time traveler, a black boxer, and a black boxer boss who was drugged and beaten to death. What are the ingredients of the brothers?

I have already written my own thing, but why did I only update 33 chapters in a year😢I hate you, author😴

Author, your script is too slow. Now X-Men has almost written 100 chapters. The writing is quite good but it is still too long.

The blacksmith protagonist who was almost persecuted by the mafia system Caught in the hands of Samsara Paradise The black hand system was turned into debris and was recycled by the park The protagonist becomes a hunter and possesses the talent for plundering Borrow the hand of reincarnation paradise Use the world's resources and your own weak bloodline of Jiuli and Chiyou descendants Create a career as a soldier master and fight to the top in bloody battles Earn back the original Black Hand System Newbie Gift Pack from Samsara Paradise - Fen Jue Swallowing flames, swallowing gold and chewing iron, integrating with thousands of soldiers, plundering everything! Are there any protagonists who are forging iron and killing at the same time? Decisive in killing, tough guy blacksmith, exciting plot, recommended to join ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧

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