Douluo: Traveling Through Huo Yuhao, I Am Really Not a Succubus

A relatively controversial work, a novel with bright spots but obvious flaws. I am a succubus, but to be honest, I don't really get the charm of the protagonist. Forget about Asasi, at least most of the female protagonists are still based on the original works. I watched Dong'er's part in detail, and it was very interesting to pursue her husband in reverse, especially when Dong'er performed Haodong's three unique skills first, it was really interesting. However, the problem with the protagonist is that the author made a mistake in positioning him - the author believes that a handsome person is "smoking smoke every day, cynical, loyal and full of trash talk", so the protagonist does not look like an avenger or is not as good as the original Huo. What we see is a "playful smile, arrogant at the front and respectful at the back" behavior. He has no moral integrity"; he lacks respect for his elders but is inexplicably popular with them; he likes to have a bad mouth and a dirty mouth and is full of arrogance; he treats girls (Dong'er's place) like a jerk; and then he casually bows to him (Old Man Wang in the beginning), without any sense of the details of how this character is liked by others. The biggest problem is... The author thinks that puffing out smoke is cool. In the early stage, the protagonist smokes for everything. You only need to relax and calm down once in a while. In the early stage, he does everything - smokes for exercise, smokes when he is not in a good mood, and takes a break. When he meets Dai Hao later, he visits his mother's grave and smokes when he goes to school... It completely ruins the character of the protagonist. Also, the beginning of the development is basically the same as Tianyan Yuhao, but a plug-in has been used to change the number of ways. This is not a good way of writing.