
Elf Graverobber
by Fox Gourd
About This Novel
This is a Pokémon fan fiction! ! ! Welcome to the real world of Pokémon! The culture of the five-thousand-year-old ancient country has a long history, and there are countless powerful Pokémon that shock one side, and each has been at the forefront for hundreds of years. Next to the Temple of the Dragon King, the forest of rotten wood demons divides the land. Anyone who enters it will die without rebirth. There are ancient fruits that are sweet and crispy and contain good fortune, but no one can take them. Under the thousand-year-old tomb, the hundred-victorious general Gala Gala sleeps here, trying to resurrect, but his way of life is cut off by a "sheep", and he has been surviving to this day. Thousand-year ghosts, dream-weaver monsters, potted plants with strange faces, ghost-fire palace lanterns, living coffins in underground palaces, death slabs... There are many unexpected good things under the earth.
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The protagonist's personality is so good that I can't stand it anymore
If someone else infringes on your fundamental interests and you find you can't afford to offend, just apologize and let it go. If you don't have enough strength, wouldn't it be like a chicken flying egg? Nothing is left. The villain provokes you again and again, and wants to kill you again and again, but you let him go just because you don't allow it now. What if someone else gets an opportunity? It's not you who dies. Seeing this, I just want to say that this protagonist has nothing but the halo of the protagonist. All kinds of small mistakes are made constantly, and big mistakes are made every once in a while. It's not easy to survive
This book is 9.2???
I want to write a realistic style but always end up with a very abstract plot development. The awkward and forced plot insertion is really not as good as just talking nonsense, "As long as you have an elf battle, you will definitely understand the other person's mind." In addition, jerky writing style and random use of various idioms and famous sentences are common problems of new writers. I won't say much about it. But I can't write but I try my best to reflect the growth of the protagonist. The result is that it seems to make people want to vomit. The classic one has no foreshadowing and suddenly becomes ill + self-reflection after being reminded by others... The same is true for the description of the characters. It's not satisfactory. Most of the characters have no three-dimensional sense at all. The image of the childhood sweetheart that I spent a lot of time describing is also weird. I really can't understand why this book is rated 9.2. Is it a brush? Or is there too many imps? Isn't there really a lot of people who think this book is good?
Good guy, I don't know much about these elves. I was completely confused when I saw the first picture and couldn't understand it. But luckily, it was normal in Chapter 2. The thing on Jiang Sheng's wrist is probably the Poké Ball.
Guess the identity of the Queen and her current situation
1. First of all, the queen has a pampered status, which can be seen from the fact that she caught a telepathic clay puppet to be her slave. 2. She has extraordinary strength; she can avoid the perception of the super-powered king-level elves. 3. The Queen may be a super-ancient existence, because it is said in the book that every time she uses her abilities, she is overloaded, and the super-ancient abilities are always emphasized in the book, so this is very possible (it is also possible that the Queen is injured) 4. The Queen's camp; the possibility of order neutrality, we don't know if it is neutral, but the order is certain. She has the ability to snatch Jiang Sheng's four iron dumbbells but she did not do that. I used a drop of an unknown item to get myself an iron dumbbell (it is also possible that the iron dumbbell was recognized as the owner, so I did not take it away by force) 5. Queen's strength; the strength is definitely not at its peak, the reason is; the queen took a drop and used it on the telepathy clay doll. From the fact that she hid it from the bronze bell, we know that the queen is very powerful, but she used a drop of precious unknown items (spiritual items) on the telepathy clay doll to serve herself , and it was overloaded when taking action, so it can be inferred that the queen's strength is not at its peak. 6. The mysterious liquid in the queen's hand is an absolute treasure of the superpower system. The reason: when the queen caught the telekinetic clay doll, she used a drop of mysterious liquid on it.
Zhao Hao was still very good. He was worried that there was something wrong with Jiang Sheng's hand and forced him to go to the hospital for a check-up. Knowing that Jiang Sheng might not be willing to go because of money, he specifically said that he would pay for it himself.
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Official(163)Scraped 18d ago
The protagonist's personality is so good that I can't stand it anymore
If someone else infringes on your fundamental interests and you find you can't afford to offend, just apologize and let it go. If you don't have enough strength, wouldn't it be like a chicken flying egg? Nothing is left. The villain provokes you again and again, and wants to kill you again and again, but you let him go just because you don't allow it now. What if someone else gets an opportunity? It's not you who dies. Seeing this, I just want to say that this protagonist has nothing but the halo of the protagonist. All kinds of small mistakes are made constantly, and big mistakes are made every once in a while. It's not easy to survive
This book is 9.2???
I want to write a realistic style but always end up with a very abstract plot development. The awkward and forced plot insertion is really not as good as just talking nonsense, "As long as you have an elf battle, you will definitely understand the other person's mind." In addition, jerky writing style and random use of various idioms and famous sentences are common problems of new writers. I won't say much about it. But I can't write but I try my best to reflect the growth of the protagonist. The result is that it seems to make people want to vomit. The classic one has no foreshadowing and suddenly becomes ill + self-reflection after being reminded by others... The same is true for the description of the characters. It's not satisfactory. Most of the characters have no three-dimensional sense at all. The image of the childhood sweetheart that I spent a lot of time describing is also weird. I really can't understand why this book is rated 9.2. Is it a brush? Or is there too many imps? Isn't there really a lot of people who think this book is good?
Good guy, I don't know much about these elves. I was completely confused when I saw the first picture and couldn't understand it. But luckily, it was normal in Chapter 2. The thing on Jiang Sheng's wrist is probably the Poké Ball.
Guess the identity of the Queen and her current situation
1. First of all, the queen has a pampered status, which can be seen from the fact that she caught a telepathic clay puppet to be her slave. 2. She has extraordinary strength; she can avoid the perception of the super-powered king-level elves. 3. The Queen may be a super-ancient existence, because it is said in the book that every time she uses her abilities, she is overloaded, and the super-ancient abilities are always emphasized in the book, so this is very possible (it is also possible that the Queen is injured) 4. The Queen's camp; the possibility of order neutrality, we don't know if it is neutral, but the order is certain. She has the ability to snatch Jiang Sheng's four iron dumbbells but she did not do that. I used a drop of an unknown item to get myself an iron dumbbell (it is also possible that the iron dumbbell was recognized as the owner, so I did not take it away by force) 5. Queen's strength; the strength is definitely not at its peak, the reason is; the queen took a drop and used it on the telepathy clay doll. From the fact that she hid it from the bronze bell, we know that the queen is very powerful, but she used a drop of precious unknown items (spiritual items) on the telepathy clay doll to serve herself , and it was overloaded when taking action, so it can be inferred that the queen's strength is not at its peak. 6. The mysterious liquid in the queen's hand is an absolute treasure of the superpower system. The reason: when the queen caught the telekinetic clay doll, she used a drop of mysterious liquid on it.
Zhao Hao was still very good. He was worried that there was something wrong with Jiang Sheng's hand and forced him to go to the hospital for a check-up. Knowing that Jiang Sheng might not be willing to go because of money, he specifically said that he would pay for it himself.
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Judging from the previous dozens of chapters, the author also has many years of writing skills. The setting of the opening chapter shows that he has extraordinary skills. He can handle the relationships between people, events and events, and scenes with ease. It's very extraordinary and the story is very interesting, don't miss it.




Judging from the previous dozens of chapters, the author also has many years of writing skills. The setting of the opening chapter shows that he has extraordinary skills. He can handle the relationships between people, events and events, and scenes with ease. It's very extraordinary and the story is very interesting, don't miss it.



This is a book recommended by an old bookworm. It is indeed quite good after reading it. It is mainly updated with more than 6,000 words every day. It is rare for a newbie to write so much after work, and the quality is not bad!




The language of this book is humorous, with constant jokes, and the character descriptions are also eye-catching. In just tens of thousands of words, a lot of foreshadowing has been laid. If it is developed well, the future plot will be very exciting.

























