A Perfect World: Starting from Becoming Huangjie

It feels okay, but there is too much involvement in the plot. The author should think carefully about how to write next. The perfect book is the best undercover book in my opinion. The plot is good and the system of that book is well written. Undercover can be considered a perfect fan book. The later part and the ending are a bit constricted, almost the same as the original. That is the best and inevitable ending. I always felt that this book was much worse than the previous book. I opened the table of contents and saw that it was all about the plot of the original work, but the protagonist was replaced. Now that I have seen the plot of Butian Pavilion ended, and I have ordered dozens of chapters later, I feel a little regretful. Looking at how the author wrote the plot behind Kunpeng's Nest, I still hope that the author can write a different plot, and write about the protagonist's style. Occasionally encounters Dashi and Xiaoshi. Now the protagonist is purely a nanny, and the plot is entirely based on the original. Compared with the undercover book, it is very different. There is no comparison with other fans, a 6 points for each one is pretty good. If the original book is out of ten, I would give the undercover one a nine. This one is an eight for the time being, but we still have to watch the follow-up plot. Let me add that the previous book was really good, the original plot and system were really good, but the early highlights of this book are really not many. In my opinion, a good and perfect fan novel should have a little bit of writing style, a little bit of a different system, not too much original plot, but more originality. In my opinion, the protagonist has already taken over the role of Aragata's sister. Stop participating in the plot of the original book and go on their own. Occasionally, the big plots will briefly intersect and share their experiences with each other. It is better to say that the author is a woman and does not understand this way of thinking. Or that the author does not have the spirit of the previous book and will not write without the plot.

Author, please answer me why the membership of my last book was free and what did the reading coins I spent count?

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I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.

I guess the author is a girl, right?

You made the protagonist too strong. The more I read, the more I read that there is a protagonist who is stronger than Shi Hao. In the later stage, the protagonist will break through the quasi-immortal emperor and fight alone against the four dark quasi-immortal emperors in the world sea. Let's see what Shi Hao is doing there.

Why don't you write about the whole of France? Now all of France is full of stallions, which is boring.

It looks good, I hope the author can be faster

Okay, okay, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Come on Crow Crow, I saw your last book, and then I saw your new book a few days ago. It's very good, come on, come on, it's really well written.