A Perfect World: Starting from Becoming Huangjie

It feels okay, but there is too much involvement in the plot. The author should think carefully about how to write next. The perfect book is the best undercover book in my opinion. The plot is good and the system of that book is well written. Undercover can be considered a perfect fan book. The later part and the ending are a bit constricted, almost the same as the original. That is the best and inevitable ending. I always felt that this book was much worse than the previous book. I opened the table of contents and saw that it was all about the plot of the original work, but the protagonist was replaced. Now that I have seen the plot of Butian Pavilion ended, and I have ordered dozens of chapters later, I feel a little regretful. Looking at how the author wrote the plot behind Kunpeng's Nest, I still hope that the author can write a different plot, and write about the protagonist's style. Occasionally encounters Dashi and Xiaoshi. Now the protagonist is purely a nanny, and the plot is entirely based on the original. Compared with the undercover book, it is very different. There is no comparison with other fans, a 6 points for each one is pretty good. If the original book is out of ten, I would give the undercover one a nine. This one is an eight for the time being, but we still have to watch the follow-up plot. Let me add that the previous book was really good, the original plot and system were really good, but the early highlights of this book are really not many. In my opinion, a good and perfect fan novel should have a little bit of writing style, a little bit of a different system, not too much original plot, but more originality. In my opinion, the protagonist has already taken over the role of Aragata's sister. Stop participating in the plot of the original book and go on their own. Occasionally, the big plots will briefly intersect and share their experiences with each other. It is better to say that the author is a woman and does not understand this way of thinking. Or that the author does not have the spirit of the previous book and will not write without the plot.

Author, please answer me why the membership of my last book was free and what did the reading coins I spent count?

I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.

I have always liked Ya Ya's books. I got to know Qing Ya through my sister, and later read Shao Hua. I have always recognized your talent. The daily warmth and healing in your words, your writing style and ideas are very good, and you can also make jokes. You are an author with fantasy in his heart and full of whimsical ideas. It's just that after reading this new book, there is a slight gap. Whether it's the jokes or the plot points, they are all too familiar and lack a little novelty. Wondering if you are still stuck in the comfort zone of the past? Have you gained new strength and gained new emotions in your life these years? But I heard that Qingya looks like Yuyu. I am also a Yuyu patient. That state is really difficult. It's like a system that keeps crashing and cannot be updated. There are many things that I can't control. If so, I understand. You don't have to write something amazing right away, and you don't have to force yourself to be productive. Bask in the sun, be in a daze, accumulate energy, take care of yourself first, let your emotions slowly calm down, feel the touch of life again, and inspiration will appear. The preciousness of writing may not lie in the skills, but in the true heartbeat and tenderness in the heart. I hope you have a good rest and adjust slowly. Waiting for you to write a novel and interesting story that belongs to the present.

For example: It doesn't matter to me whether the protagonist of a book is male or female. Male novels and female novels are not differentiated by the gender of the protagonist. But it's your problem if you post the male version in a female way. It looks like it is written by a female author, and it also sounds like it is written by a man who feels like a woman. When I saw Dashi and Xiaoshi jealous of the protagonist, I felt like my eyes were not clean. I even suspected that I was in the wrong channel. I really want to know what kind of people the audience of this book is.

The books written by the author are just beautiful. The protagonist of the previous book was the sister of Emperor Wu Shi. The protagonist of this book directly becomes the sister of Emperor Huangtian. Good guy

Update soon. Update quickly, update quickly

Lily, I will need a few willow gods and witches soon. If this book continues to be updated, the ruthless empress will be added.

I hope you finish writing this and then go on to write about Shengxu

Come on, Yaya, I came from your Mo Yingluo, hehe, I want you to have 10,000 per day😍😍😍