
Douluo: I Am the Pinnacle of Martial Arts, and I Rise in the World with My Sword
About This Novel
[No system + non-canopy + single female protagonist Shui Binger] Zhou Qiubai, who was a master of martial arts in his previous life, traveled through the world of Douluo and awakened the long sword known as the useless martial soul. In this case, can he be a soul master? Can't you still become a martial artist? The Poseidon weapon only weighs more than 100,000 kilograms, and Jianghu martial arts can become a peerless skill; the Tang Sect's hidden weapons can even assassinate Soul Douluo, and even titled Douluo, so why should he be a Soul Master? The true form of Wuhun? In front of me, it's just a mantis' arm acting as a chariot; the inheritance of gods? It's just a false god, I don't even want it if you give it to me; the best beast martial spirit? Extreme martial spirit? How many swords can you block from me? This is a rebellion of "jianghu" against "sect" and "martial arts" against "theocracy". The sword in white, the gun that never returns, the thousands of books, the meaning behind... The autumn leaves are half rolled and half blown by the wind. A sword of frost chills the nineteen states. The white clothes do not stain the earthly things, but I ask God whether I can be free? From Sotuo City defeating Tang San, Liuyunbu playing with Haotian, to Tiandou City rebuking Yu Xiaogang and interrogating Jianchen's heart; from defeating the Golden Generation in the continent-wide competition, to Sanwen God Realm in the killing capital; in the end, he will unite all the forces trapped by fate and swing a sword to cut off the shackles of the aloft gods. This is a legend about freedom, choice and resistance. Jianghu is not far away, in everyone's heart.
What Readers Think
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Official(18)Scraped 3d ago
Mixed
Let's talk about the advantages first: it doesn't overwhelm your wits, the writing is good, solid skills are revealed between the lines, and the combat descriptions are also good. Disadvantages: Too humble. When faced with Tang Hao forcing him to practice skills and recognize his master, he still used respectful words such as "senior, junior, you" every sentence. It's not that he has never beaten Tang Hao. It felt too weird to say the respectful words after scolding Tang Hao. The article clearly stated that "even the enemy does not need SARS" which made me feel uncomfortable. In the era of decisive killings, such a person suddenly appeared. It is... Surprising?
Why do these fellow Douluo people insist on participating in that academy competition? What is the use of that competition? It trains teamwork and will be useful later.
Don't comment on the rating, just comment on the imagination. I've seen enough Douluo classics. What do you want to write based on traditional Jianghu literature? Is it cool or not, has no imagination, is it chivalrous? What about your content? The writing style is okay but the subject matter is not suitable for you.
There is no arena in Douluo, but there is indeed no conspiracy in it, but it is pure intrigue. They kill each other because of their soul bones, and their moods are suppressed because of their talents. There are no rules in the arena at all. There are only countries and countries and sects in the sect. There is only one Spirit Hall that is incompatible. What's more, there is a crazy woman and a fool young master in it, plus a big priest who doesn't care about anything, and only wants the angel god to come to the mortal world.
Super, good, good, good, take a look, take a look, take a look
Compared to 99% of fanfics that have Teddy attributes, the themes and concepts are very novel and the writing is pretty good. It just depends on whether the character can stand up or not, but there are a lot of warblers and swallows in the back. After reading a book, there are no shortage of enemies, every woman is in decline, and the character opens and shuts up about this freedom and that carefreeness.
Alas, I hope the CP is Yang Guyun, I thought it was a double male lead
Actually, I have a question, why can't I take back the weapon soul once it's gone?
The author's character creation is quite good, and I don't think I've seen anything like you, chivalrous,
Ning Rongrong's section is superfluous. If you want to discuss it with Chen Xin, this is not the beginning.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(18)Scraped 3d ago
Mixed
Let's talk about the advantages first: it doesn't overwhelm your wits, the writing is good, solid skills are revealed between the lines, and the combat descriptions are also good. Disadvantages: Too humble. When faced with Tang Hao forcing him to practice skills and recognize his master, he still used respectful words such as "senior, junior, you" every sentence. It's not that he has never beaten Tang Hao. It felt too weird to say the respectful words after scolding Tang Hao. The article clearly stated that "even the enemy does not need SARS" which made me feel uncomfortable. In the era of decisive killings, such a person suddenly appeared. It is... Surprising?
Why do these fellow Douluo people insist on participating in that academy competition? What is the use of that competition? It trains teamwork and will be useful later.
Don't comment on the rating, just comment on the imagination. I've seen enough Douluo classics. What do you want to write based on traditional Jianghu literature? Is it cool or not, has no imagination, is it chivalrous? What about your content? The writing style is okay but the subject matter is not suitable for you.
There is no arena in Douluo, but there is indeed no conspiracy in it, but it is pure intrigue. They kill each other because of their soul bones, and their moods are suppressed because of their talents. There are no rules in the arena at all. There are only countries and countries and sects in the sect. There is only one Spirit Hall that is incompatible. What's more, there is a crazy woman and a fool young master in it, plus a big priest who doesn't care about anything, and only wants the angel god to come to the mortal world.
Super, good, good, good, take a look, take a look, take a look
Compared to 99% of fanfics that have Teddy attributes, the themes and concepts are very novel and the writing is pretty good. It just depends on whether the character can stand up or not, but there are a lot of warblers and swallows in the back. After reading a book, there are no shortage of enemies, every woman is in decline, and the character opens and shuts up about this freedom and that carefreeness.
Alas, I hope the CP is Yang Guyun, I thought it was a double male lead
Actually, I have a question, why can't I take back the weapon soul once it's gone?
The author's character creation is quite good, and I don't think I've seen anything like you, chivalrous,
Ning Rongrong's section is superfluous. If you want to discuss it with Chen Xin, this is not the beginning.









