
I Open a Ninja School in Marvel
by Boli Cat
About This Novel
In New York. There is a school, the New York Academy for Gifted Youngsters. There is a principal, purple wavy contact lenses, and a black Taoist jade pendant. There was a specially recruited teacher with flashing white teeth who almost kicked the purple potato spirit to death. There is a student with a dazzling golden ponytail and a diamond-shaped mark on his forehead. Behind them stood a large group of people in "fancy clothes", each looking at the visitors from outside with disdain. "From now on, I will let you feel the pain!" "Where there is a teacher, the fire will burn!" "Art...is an explosion!" "Burn! Youth!" "You... Want to dance too!" ............ Ps: Marvel movie universe system. This book is also known as "It is possible for me to open a ninja school in the world", "The whole book will not be published in Marvel", "It is impossible to chain ninja schools"
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Official(113)Scraped 16d ago
Give the author some suggestions.
It is recommended that the author collect some original Marvel comics and characters. First of all, Xiaochong is determined to be a student model. Xiaochong in the Marvel Cinematic Universe is only 17 years old in 2019, which also complies with the system's enrollment regulations. The second is Mysterio. After brainwashing him with illusions to help him change his ways, he can be taught some illusions and ninjutsu. He can also be a character similar to Payne to do things that are inconvenient for the protagonist. When Ultron Crisis comes, we can make a Vision version of Mechanical Naruto to replace Vision or something like that, but the Mechanical Naruto can look the same as the real Naruto or Uzumaki Mamen's Ako. After all, Ultron's human-creation technology is quite good, and it meets the enrollment regulations according to his age, so he can make a Naruto panel. There is also Thor, a proper god-level teammate. In the early stage, the protagonist can teach Thor to develop the ability to control gravity and repulsion through the ability to control thunder and lightning. During this period, Odin may be given the title of God of Ninja, and then develop a Shinra Tenzheng and All-Seeing Tenyin. When Thor is blind in one eye in Ragnarok in the later stage, he can be given a contact lens to increase his strength again. Finally, Daredevil (also in the Marvel Cinematic Universe) can also give a blind man a pair of Byakugan. As a physical master, Daredevil and the Byakugan may collide with each other to produce strange effects. Help Daredevil defeat the hands of all ninjas and after the meeting, you can try to absorb the control (original timeline Daredevil became their boss after defeating the Hand and meeting), and then changed his name to "Akatsuki" to commemorate the original work, so that the protagonist can control the underground forces and recruit people on a large scale through the connections in the underground world (if the protagonist gets mixed up with the boss of Hydra, he can do similar things.).
Author, you are
Author, are you a eunuch? Why? We don't ask you to update much, but you can't be a eunuch. One update every day is fine. Or, one update every two days is acceptable, but you can't enter the palace.
This is an interesting book worth reading (not bragging)
The subject matter of this book is novel, the writing style is delicate, the content is light and interesting, it is daily life, and it is quite good-looking. The only shortcoming is that the author is short and weak, and there are too few updates, so it is not enough to read (ノД`)
Read some thoughts on the 100 loyalty setting. Want to communicate
Nowadays, many or basically academy streams and sect streams all directly attract loyalty, which makes me always feel like apprentices and students are just like puppets. There is nothing wrong with the apprentice's loyalty increasing through a series of operations. It is directly bound to 100 loyalty, and it feels like a newborn baby has been brainwashed by military education since childhood. Didn't the author write about school? It's not a sect or organization. The students they teach must go out into society on their own. We can't all stay in school for the rest of our lives, right? With this kind of setting, those who are taught are not students, but soldiers. Aren't students cute because they think differently from their seniors? No matter it's right or wrong. Isn't Naruto wonderful because everyone has their own thoughts? Author, isn't your setting just forcibly tying everyone together? Wouldn't this kind of writing just follow the Marvel plot and not have any internal conflicts within the academy? Finally, I would like to recommend a book to you, August Flying Eagle's The First Patriarch in History, which was completed in 2016. It is the best-looking sect-style novel I have ever read. I hope the author of this book will work hard and achieve good results.
Sister Nan
Are you Sister Nan's younger brother or older brother?
Sign-in building, supporting building.
The names of the third-in-commands of the previous generation were recruited, and there were more supporting roles. They wrote young people, subordinates, and subordinates every day. I really couldn't think of a good name. Of course, if you want to be selected, don't give a random name, such as Nicholas Zhaosi, cats will not be hired!
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I think the development of this book is too slow, and the plot is too slow for many words. Even Tetsuo I didn't play. I think the author can speed up the plot appropriately, otherwise there will be nothing interesting, and fewer people will read it. If the plot is too mediocre, it is not good. For example, skipping some daily plots in the school, let the plot have ups and downs to build up the plot. In this way, more people will naturally read it (this is just my personal suggestion. The author is free to adopt it or not. Of course, if the author has an outline, you don't have to adopt it if you think it doesn't fit the outline.) That's it.
Very well written, cheers
<span style="color: red">Will this author be quarantined this time? 🤡</Span>
The author is very good at numbers
Two-thirds of one chapter are the inner activities of Erbi Pig's Feet.
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Official(113)Scraped 16d ago
Give the author some suggestions.
It is recommended that the author collect some original Marvel comics and characters. First of all, Xiaochong is determined to be a student model. Xiaochong in the Marvel Cinematic Universe is only 17 years old in 2019, which also complies with the system's enrollment regulations. The second is Mysterio. After brainwashing him with illusions to help him change his ways, he can be taught some illusions and ninjutsu. He can also be a character similar to Payne to do things that are inconvenient for the protagonist. When Ultron Crisis comes, we can make a Vision version of Mechanical Naruto to replace Vision or something like that, but the Mechanical Naruto can look the same as the real Naruto or Uzumaki Mamen's Ako. After all, Ultron's human-creation technology is quite good, and it meets the enrollment regulations according to his age, so he can make a Naruto panel. There is also Thor, a proper god-level teammate. In the early stage, the protagonist can teach Thor to develop the ability to control gravity and repulsion through the ability to control thunder and lightning. During this period, Odin may be given the title of God of Ninja, and then develop a Shinra Tenzheng and All-Seeing Tenyin. When Thor is blind in one eye in Ragnarok in the later stage, he can be given a contact lens to increase his strength again. Finally, Daredevil (also in the Marvel Cinematic Universe) can also give a blind man a pair of Byakugan. As a physical master, Daredevil and the Byakugan may collide with each other to produce strange effects. Help Daredevil defeat the hands of all ninjas and after the meeting, you can try to absorb the control (original timeline Daredevil became their boss after defeating the Hand and meeting), and then changed his name to "Akatsuki" to commemorate the original work, so that the protagonist can control the underground forces and recruit people on a large scale through the connections in the underground world (if the protagonist gets mixed up with the boss of Hydra, he can do similar things.).
Author, you are
Author, are you a eunuch? Why? We don't ask you to update much, but you can't be a eunuch. One update every day is fine. Or, one update every two days is acceptable, but you can't enter the palace.
This is an interesting book worth reading (not bragging)
The subject matter of this book is novel, the writing style is delicate, the content is light and interesting, it is daily life, and it is quite good-looking. The only shortcoming is that the author is short and weak, and there are too few updates, so it is not enough to read (ノД`)
Read some thoughts on the 100 loyalty setting. Want to communicate
Nowadays, many or basically academy streams and sect streams all directly attract loyalty, which makes me always feel like apprentices and students are just like puppets. There is nothing wrong with the apprentice's loyalty increasing through a series of operations. It is directly bound to 100 loyalty, and it feels like a newborn baby has been brainwashed by military education since childhood. Didn't the author write about school? It's not a sect or organization. The students they teach must go out into society on their own. We can't all stay in school for the rest of our lives, right? With this kind of setting, those who are taught are not students, but soldiers. Aren't students cute because they think differently from their seniors? No matter it's right or wrong. Isn't Naruto wonderful because everyone has their own thoughts? Author, isn't your setting just forcibly tying everyone together? Wouldn't this kind of writing just follow the Marvel plot and not have any internal conflicts within the academy? Finally, I would like to recommend a book to you, August Flying Eagle's The First Patriarch in History, which was completed in 2016. It is the best-looking sect-style novel I have ever read. I hope the author of this book will work hard and achieve good results.
Sister Nan
Are you Sister Nan's younger brother or older brother?
Sign-in building, supporting building.
The names of the third-in-commands of the previous generation were recruited, and there were more supporting roles. They wrote young people, subordinates, and subordinates every day. I really couldn't think of a good name. Of course, if you want to be selected, don't give a random name, such as Nicholas Zhaosi, cats will not be hired!
Leave a comment and give a suggestion
I think the development of this book is too slow, and the plot is too slow for many words. Even Tetsuo I didn't play. I think the author can speed up the plot appropriately, otherwise there will be nothing interesting, and fewer people will read it. If the plot is too mediocre, it is not good. For example, skipping some daily plots in the school, let the plot have ups and downs to build up the plot. In this way, more people will naturally read it (this is just my personal suggestion. The author is free to adopt it or not. Of course, if the author has an outline, you don't have to adopt it if you think it doesn't fit the outline.) That's it.
Very well written, cheers
<span style="color: red">Will this author be quarantined this time? 🤡</Span>
The author is very good at numbers
Two-thirds of one chapter are the inner activities of Erbi Pig's Feet.




















