Obtain the Taotie Bloodline from the Beginning of the Fight
by Thunder Lord
About This Novel
(The new book "Dou Po, Copy the Entries, Start the Bloodline of the Sky-Swallowing Python", old friends, please come and take a look) Main world: Dou Po--Ancient World Sub-line world: Martial Arts, Douluo Continent, Swallowing Starry Sky... Ling Feng made an appointment with a female Internet celebrity, but the other party would die in the light of the public, and immediately die socially. By chance, his soul traveled to the Dou Qi Continent, and he obtained the treasure box lottery system. As long as you upgrade one level, you can draw once. "Congratulations to the host, you have drawn a rare treasure box and obtained the Taotie bloodline. Congratulations to the host, you have drawn a mythical treasure box and obtained the Creation Magic Pen..." System: "Host, you are not the husband of Lady Luck, are you? Otherwise, why would Luck be so in love with you?" "..." Ling Feng: "Why don't you say that I am possessed by Emperor Ou? "
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Thoughts after viewing
First of all, to set up an enemy with the Xiao family is to forcibly release poison. The protagonist is a fighter, and the strength of the fighter is unsatisfactory. It takes half a day to fight a fighting spirit at the peak of the Dou Emperor. With your strength as a fighter, the aftermath of the Dou Emperor's hit can shock you to death. You will only be injured?
Thoughts after viewing
Xiao Ke can actually hold back for a while and rely on food to raise his cultivation to the level of the Great Dou Master before he goes out. There is also a Creation Pen that I feel is too invincible, so I can leave a Spirit Bead. The Spirit Bead can also be modified. For example, it can copy all the knowledge of the host's level 2 creature, excluding cultivation. This is also an invincible article, but it doesn't look so brainless. I hope the author will adopt it for his next novel. This one has over 100 chapters and all the outlines and world views are similar, so I won't beep. (This is a reflection after viewing. Please write according to your own ideas. Don't be misled by readers. Good writing is a valuable experience!)
good.
It's pretty cool to watch. You can do whatever you want. There are bullshit rules. This is called being free and easy. If you don't like it, you will be killed directly. If you see someone who is beautiful, you will get it directly. If you don't like someone, you will get it. What's the saying about killing his whole family? Those who violate my heavenly power will destroy the orthodoxy and destroy the bloodline inheritance.
I'll go, I'm convinced. Just because Xiao Yan stole an iron piece from you at the beginning, are you disrespectful to the Xiao family? And if the boss buys it for you and then robs it, no one will say anything. The key is that he didn't sell you, and then Xiao Yan bought it and insisted that he robbed it. At the auction house, you are selling something, and then the price is very high, and then someone calls it rubbish. Are you angry?
Ling Feng should not be Chinese.
Every time Ling Feng draws people, they seem to be from the island country.
Thoughts after reading
Personally, I think it's okay, but the protagonist's ability to leapfrog challenges is too strong. The Great Dou Shi can't defeat the Dou Emperor no matter how many times he is, and he's still at the peak of the Dou Emperor. You can use the Great Master's timeline to write about Gu Xun'er. You can write something like hate giving rise to love (personal opinion is for reference only, don't like it if you don't like it)
persuade to quit
When he saw that he was an enemy of Xiao Yan, he immediately persuaded him to quit. He was too poisonous. He had been a man for two generations and didn't know how to calm down. His speaking quality was not like that of the protagonist. The protagonist who was full of foul words?
What?
After looking at dozens of photos of the protagonist, you still don't have a single good brother? Not to mention brothers, at least I have a friend. All of them are women.
This is my first comment for you
Not bad, it's my type. Come on, write goodbye.
Great
I think you wrote it very well. Much better than those licking the protagonist.
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Official(322)Scraped 6d ago
Thoughts after viewing
First of all, to set up an enemy with the Xiao family is to forcibly release poison. The protagonist is a fighter, and the strength of the fighter is unsatisfactory. It takes half a day to fight a fighting spirit at the peak of the Dou Emperor. With your strength as a fighter, the aftermath of the Dou Emperor's hit can shock you to death. You will only be injured?
Thoughts after viewing
Xiao Ke can actually hold back for a while and rely on food to raise his cultivation to the level of the Great Dou Master before he goes out. There is also a Creation Pen that I feel is too invincible, so I can leave a Spirit Bead. The Spirit Bead can also be modified. For example, it can copy all the knowledge of the host's level 2 creature, excluding cultivation. This is also an invincible article, but it doesn't look so brainless. I hope the author will adopt it for his next novel. This one has over 100 chapters and all the outlines and world views are similar, so I won't beep. (This is a reflection after viewing. Please write according to your own ideas. Don't be misled by readers. Good writing is a valuable experience!)
good.
It's pretty cool to watch. You can do whatever you want. There are bullshit rules. This is called being free and easy. If you don't like it, you will be killed directly. If you see someone who is beautiful, you will get it directly. If you don't like someone, you will get it. What's the saying about killing his whole family? Those who violate my heavenly power will destroy the orthodoxy and destroy the bloodline inheritance.
I'll go, I'm convinced. Just because Xiao Yan stole an iron piece from you at the beginning, are you disrespectful to the Xiao family? And if the boss buys it for you and then robs it, no one will say anything. The key is that he didn't sell you, and then Xiao Yan bought it and insisted that he robbed it. At the auction house, you are selling something, and then the price is very high, and then someone calls it rubbish. Are you angry?
Ling Feng should not be Chinese.
Every time Ling Feng draws people, they seem to be from the island country.
Thoughts after reading
Personally, I think it's okay, but the protagonist's ability to leapfrog challenges is too strong. The Great Dou Shi can't defeat the Dou Emperor no matter how many times he is, and he's still at the peak of the Dou Emperor. You can use the Great Master's timeline to write about Gu Xun'er. You can write something like hate giving rise to love (personal opinion is for reference only, don't like it if you don't like it)
persuade to quit
When he saw that he was an enemy of Xiao Yan, he immediately persuaded him to quit. He was too poisonous. He had been a man for two generations and didn't know how to calm down. His speaking quality was not like that of the protagonist. The protagonist who was full of foul words?
What?
After looking at dozens of photos of the protagonist, you still don't have a single good brother? Not to mention brothers, at least I have a friend. All of them are women.
This is my first comment for you
Not bad, it's my type. Come on, write goodbye.
Great
I think you wrote it very well. Much better than those licking the protagonist.
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