Versatile Mage: I Became the Ancient King, and the System Came
by Yue Bai Qian
About This Novel
When Zhao Chen woke up and traveled to the magical world, he said it was pretty good. Magic is good, you have to learn it! But why is it worn on the body of the ancient king! ? Please, this is the ancient king who created the Chinese Undead Empire! The pinnacle of the five series of forbidden spells, the world is so big, and there is no other magic that can surpass it! Moreover, what about the system! ? How to play without plug-ins! Zhao Chen, who had spent a full ten years in fear and uneasiness, finally merged with the ancient king, was about to leave the Shayuan Imperial Tomb and return to the colorful human world. At this time, the system is here again! ? No, you are ten years late, what a joke! He has become an ancient king, a powerful undead emperor standing on top of the world! It's very difficult for him to turn around and be a good person again! Unless... The first sign-in reward - the Shadow Corps! The shadow warriors are all monarch-level! The ghost generals of the nine battle groups are all at the supreme monarch level! Shadow King Tara is even more emperor-level! Bo City, this is his territory! The lackeys of the Black Church, those blind demons who dare to make mistakes, are simply seeking death! This magical world has been divided for too long! I, the ancient king, conquered the world and unified the eight wastelands during my lifetime! After death, he wants to rule the world! Let everything belong to me, Great Qin Huaxia! Let all those beauties live in my magical Afang Palace!
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Official(33)Scraped 5d ago
After reading the first two chapters, I feel like the following chapters are the best. I can't stand it anymore. Very unreasonable. The logic doesn't make sense. Looks very awkward
Another loser who has never seen a woman is doing random changes. Whose ancient king is a prostitute?
I'll be the first to comment
Let me talk about my thoughts first. If you really follow what is said in the introduction, "shoot and sword the whole world with one's own power", then my opinion is that you have to watch it. Whether it's a harem or the protagonist is not flying (FEI), in the end it all depends on how the author writes the plot. The last thing I want to say here is that I like harems and sex, and I have other skills when it comes to fighting and killing😡 That's probably it. Samsung doesn't trust it, so question it first.
I'm not used to seeing the main character as a female.
The writing is not good at all. Now you are living like a dog. One generation of monarchs and one generation of undead emperors. Why the river under human crotch? Ah?
My dear Mo Fan, you are invincible and Mo Fan has turned into a woman? You are crazy about wanting women. Why don't you turn everyone in this world into women?
Wow, it's so hard to accept that Mo Fan is written as a woman.
The writing style is a bit off-topic and the logic is not fluent. I hope to keep up the good work.
I read it again, and there are many details in the writing. . Slightly abstract. 😋😋There are also a lot of things about the setting, which are a bit uncoordinated and illogical. Can't your ninja army hunt monsters and get spirits or something? Also let others prepare it for you. Secondly, you can enter the Holy Spring through the shadow system, why do you still use the snake charm and the sheep charm? Did you take off your pants and fart? 😐If you really can't, it's okay to let a ninja soldier in. You just have to use the Snake Charm and the Sheep Charm, and then use Shadow to tie them in. It feels like a brain twitch. The presence of the Black Shadow Corps is too low. Also, entering the academy through the back door? As a matter of fact, Tang Yue, as the judge, did not have the slightest doubt. Although I know there are many people who hate Tang Yue and have no brains, but you... . Just stop acting, right? 🤐 There are also many details whose logic is very illogical. This is not to say that I am nit-picking, but the point is that even if I read it as a mindless novel, my brain hurts from reading it. 😜😜Some settings in other works appeared in my mind almost subconsciously. Then it will subconsciously compare your settings. Once there is a deviation, it will feel inconsistent. 🤐🤐Seriously, you might as well create a setting yourself. Even if you add magical modifications to the original work of other works, or make a patch and modify it to adapt to the rules of the world, it will be fine🙄🙄. Give it a moderate rating here. Hope to keep up the good work next time. Don't make things difficult for anyone. 😶😶
Opening the sewer high is not called driving low.
At the beginning, 5 series of forbidden spells were added to the strength of the little emperor, but in the end, he went to Bo City to do a small plot, and went to do the plot. It was obvious that he had almost invincible strength.
I'm so convinced. What did you write? I'm so confused after seeing this. You think you're very creative. I'll send you a video.
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Official(33)Scraped 5d ago
After reading the first two chapters, I feel like the following chapters are the best. I can't stand it anymore. Very unreasonable. The logic doesn't make sense. Looks very awkward
Another loser who has never seen a woman is doing random changes. Whose ancient king is a prostitute?
I'll be the first to comment
Let me talk about my thoughts first. If you really follow what is said in the introduction, "shoot and sword the whole world with one's own power", then my opinion is that you have to watch it. Whether it's a harem or the protagonist is not flying (FEI), in the end it all depends on how the author writes the plot. The last thing I want to say here is that I like harems and sex, and I have other skills when it comes to fighting and killing😡 That's probably it. Samsung doesn't trust it, so question it first.
I'm not used to seeing the main character as a female.
The writing is not good at all. Now you are living like a dog. One generation of monarchs and one generation of undead emperors. Why the river under human crotch? Ah?
My dear Mo Fan, you are invincible and Mo Fan has turned into a woman? You are crazy about wanting women. Why don't you turn everyone in this world into women?
Wow, it's so hard to accept that Mo Fan is written as a woman.
The writing style is a bit off-topic and the logic is not fluent. I hope to keep up the good work.
I read it again, and there are many details in the writing. . Slightly abstract. 😋😋There are also a lot of things about the setting, which are a bit uncoordinated and illogical. Can't your ninja army hunt monsters and get spirits or something? Also let others prepare it for you. Secondly, you can enter the Holy Spring through the shadow system, why do you still use the snake charm and the sheep charm? Did you take off your pants and fart? 😐If you really can't, it's okay to let a ninja soldier in. You just have to use the Snake Charm and the Sheep Charm, and then use Shadow to tie them in. It feels like a brain twitch. The presence of the Black Shadow Corps is too low. Also, entering the academy through the back door? As a matter of fact, Tang Yue, as the judge, did not have the slightest doubt. Although I know there are many people who hate Tang Yue and have no brains, but you... . Just stop acting, right? 🤐 There are also many details whose logic is very illogical. This is not to say that I am nit-picking, but the point is that even if I read it as a mindless novel, my brain hurts from reading it. 😜😜Some settings in other works appeared in my mind almost subconsciously. Then it will subconsciously compare your settings. Once there is a deviation, it will feel inconsistent. 🤐🤐Seriously, you might as well create a setting yourself. Even if you add magical modifications to the original work of other works, or make a patch and modify it to adapt to the rules of the world, it will be fine🙄🙄. Give it a moderate rating here. Hope to keep up the good work next time. Don't make things difficult for anyone. 😶😶
Opening the sewer high is not called driving low.
At the beginning, 5 series of forbidden spells were added to the strength of the little emperor, but in the end, he went to Bo City to do a small plot, and went to do the plot. It was obvious that he had almost invincible strength.
I'm so convinced. What did you write? I'm so confused after seeing this. You think you're very creative. I'll send you a video.
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