
Hogwarts: Lux Doesn't Want to Be the Witch That Destroys Nations
by Matchmaker
About This Novel
There is a legend circulating in Hogwarts: Miss Lux cried for the first time and gave birth to a Dementor; Miss Lux's first nightmare gave birth to Obscurus; Miss Lux's first fear was the birth of a Boggart; Miss Lux laughs for the first time and gives birth to Peeves; Miss Lux's light side turned into Voldemort! "Hogwarts, these are all rumors!" Miss Lux protested, "You don't have dark and heavy secrets, you are all light and bright!" (Happy to Hogwarts fans, there are many game elements, involving some content of Hogwarts Legacy)
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Official(13)Scraped 9d ago
A little suggestion (the author can consider it at his discretion)
After reading novels for more than ten years, I have read almost all types of male and female novels. I finally settled on the niche category of transformation novels because the heroines created by male authors in transformation novels (transformation and marriage are not discussed here) are closest to people's idealistic perfect personalities. They also have the personality charms and advantages of both men and women. The characteristics of both genders are reflected in one person, which I envy. When reading novels, the protagonist is introduced from the beginning, and gradually becomes a spectator perspective, pursuing the ideal perfect character. Therefore, I believe that the goal and essence of the transformation novel is to tell the adventures of a perfect personality image in the virtual novel to make up for the shortcomings of our real life. The above is too long-winded, but in fact I just want to point out the following points: 1. The three magical tools of pretending to be B (pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, appearing as a saint in front of others, and returning home in fine clothes) can be used appropriately, but they must stay away from the clichés of male porn novels. 2. The daily plot and the protagonist's decision-making should avoid the indecisiveness and love-making of female pornographic novels, and should be innovative. 3. Most of the plot of the story is best to revolve around the protagonist, and the number of new writing subjects should be appropriate. If the perspective is switched too frequently (such as avatars, organizations, the growth of original new characters, etc.), It will not only increase the writing burden and make it impossible to take into consideration, but also make readers feel inconsistent. 4. Most of the exciting points and plot conflict points are best rooted in the main line or hidden line of the novel set by the author, rather than the branch line. 5. The final boss setting of the fan fiction should be close to the world view of the original book in the early stage of the plot. The author has settings similar to those of extraterrestrial natural enemies in the book. Although there may be plans to ascend or cross the world later in the plot, in the early stage, the sense of dissonance should be minimized and the process should be gradual. When I read Swallowing the Stars, I felt very comfortable reading the early part about the earth. However, the sudden change in the plot from the earth part to the space part caused a serious sense of dissonance. Thanks to the author for listening to my ramble, thank you😘
He is just a tool for the system, and his character design is very weak. He only relies on Lux's dark side jokes to support him. It is a very mediocre fanfic.
ancient poison
It is really poisonous to create a clone that has independent consciousness and the protagonist cannot control or read the mind. Is the author writing this to screen readers? Or does he want to write a double protagonist🤣? If you want to write a clone, you must at least give the protagonist a way to prevent the clone.
Even the disgusting plot of a clone with independent consciousness has come out😐
I feel like what I wrote later is the same as what was generated by AI. Don't fool me with AI.
Listen to the advice
As we all know, the author is a species that gets dizzy after writing, but Xiaohongzhu is trying to persuade me. The outline of this book is divided into three parts. It is currently in the period from 1938 to 1945, and it supports about 600,000 to 800,000 words. The span of the text is very long, so sometimes I write that I don't know what the world is. Generally speaking, if you think there are problems with the plot logic, you can raise it in this building, and I will adopt and modify it if I think it is reasonable.
It's so confusing. If you ask me to say that time travel is rubbish, especially if you still eat books, author, do you still remember that you said in the previous article that Lucius and his partner just got engaged? As a result, his son Draco popped up later. Did you write it using AI?
Hahahaha update update update update update update
Question about runes
Tom's current rune acquisition is indeed a bit too hasty. I will revise it again this week to see how to arrange it reasonably. I'm sorry for now, and I will add an update chapter.
A clone with independent consciousness and extremely poisonous
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Official(13)Scraped 9d ago
A little suggestion (the author can consider it at his discretion)
After reading novels for more than ten years, I have read almost all types of male and female novels. I finally settled on the niche category of transformation novels because the heroines created by male authors in transformation novels (transformation and marriage are not discussed here) are closest to people's idealistic perfect personalities. They also have the personality charms and advantages of both men and women. The characteristics of both genders are reflected in one person, which I envy. When reading novels, the protagonist is introduced from the beginning, and gradually becomes a spectator perspective, pursuing the ideal perfect character. Therefore, I believe that the goal and essence of the transformation novel is to tell the adventures of a perfect personality image in the virtual novel to make up for the shortcomings of our real life. The above is too long-winded, but in fact I just want to point out the following points: 1. The three magical tools of pretending to be B (pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, appearing as a saint in front of others, and returning home in fine clothes) can be used appropriately, but they must stay away from the clichés of male porn novels. 2. The daily plot and the protagonist's decision-making should avoid the indecisiveness and love-making of female pornographic novels, and should be innovative. 3. Most of the plot of the story is best to revolve around the protagonist, and the number of new writing subjects should be appropriate. If the perspective is switched too frequently (such as avatars, organizations, the growth of original new characters, etc.), It will not only increase the writing burden and make it impossible to take into consideration, but also make readers feel inconsistent. 4. Most of the exciting points and plot conflict points are best rooted in the main line or hidden line of the novel set by the author, rather than the branch line. 5. The final boss setting of the fan fiction should be close to the world view of the original book in the early stage of the plot. The author has settings similar to those of extraterrestrial natural enemies in the book. Although there may be plans to ascend or cross the world later in the plot, in the early stage, the sense of dissonance should be minimized and the process should be gradual. When I read Swallowing the Stars, I felt very comfortable reading the early part about the earth. However, the sudden change in the plot from the earth part to the space part caused a serious sense of dissonance. Thanks to the author for listening to my ramble, thank you😘
He is just a tool for the system, and his character design is very weak. He only relies on Lux's dark side jokes to support him. It is a very mediocre fanfic.
ancient poison
It is really poisonous to create a clone that has independent consciousness and the protagonist cannot control or read the mind. Is the author writing this to screen readers? Or does he want to write a double protagonist🤣? If you want to write a clone, you must at least give the protagonist a way to prevent the clone.
Even the disgusting plot of a clone with independent consciousness has come out😐
I feel like what I wrote later is the same as what was generated by AI. Don't fool me with AI.
Listen to the advice
As we all know, the author is a species that gets dizzy after writing, but Xiaohongzhu is trying to persuade me. The outline of this book is divided into three parts. It is currently in the period from 1938 to 1945, and it supports about 600,000 to 800,000 words. The span of the text is very long, so sometimes I write that I don't know what the world is. Generally speaking, if you think there are problems with the plot logic, you can raise it in this building, and I will adopt and modify it if I think it is reasonable.
It's so confusing. If you ask me to say that time travel is rubbish, especially if you still eat books, author, do you still remember that you said in the previous article that Lucius and his partner just got engaged? As a result, his son Draco popped up later. Did you write it using AI?
Hahahaha update update update update update update
Question about runes
Tom's current rune acquisition is indeed a bit too hasty. I will revise it again this week to see how to arrange it reasonably. I'm sorry for now, and I will add an update chapter.
A clone with independent consciousness and extremely poisonous
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There is a legend circulating in Hogwarts: Miss Lux cried for the first time and gave birth to a Dementor; Miss Lux's first nightmare gave birth to Obscurus; Miss Lux's first fear was the birth of a Boggart; Miss Lux laughs for the first time and gives birth to Peeves; Miss Lux's light side turned into Voldemort! "Hogwarts, these are all rumors!" Miss Lux protested, "You don't have dark and heavy secrets, you are all light and bright!" (Happy to Hogwarts fans, the game has many elements and involves some content of Hogwarts Legacy)












