Ultra: Evolve from the Ultimate Creature

I don't understand. To be honest, you can be killed by ultraviolet rays. It feels like you might as well embody an immortal cultivating technique, the Heaven Swallowing Demon Technique, even a weakened version. It can directly absorb the core of a monster to become stronger, or absorb Eminaru. Ore, or directly embodying the origin of light, let alone manifesting it, let Sha Niu write a logical Ultra fanfic, write everything you need, and then embody the things in it. Are you still afraid that you will not be able to level up and will not be strong enough? The source of light with growth potential is not much better than what you write here. I originally wanted to read it, but apart from Silly Girl and the Horse Talisman, I have never seen many of the things you have embodied. I really can't stand it anymore. You are afraid of death, so no problem. Combat experience can be embodied directly, right? It can't be embodied. Go write a novel, combat experience inheritance stone, won't you? It's a super plug-in. It's better than the system when used. It has everything you want. It's very uncomfortable for you to do seven things here. Tai Chi, Ba Chi, the origin of light, and the energy core. You have read systematic novels. You have a chance to have an epiphany and understand the Tai Chi field. You should also have weapons, right? A novel is written within a novel, and it becomes reality after reading the novel. What a great subject matter. If it weren't for my lack of writing skills, I would just open a book for you to read. It would be no better than you making it difficult for many people to understand. I believe I'm not the only one who can't understand the concrete things you wrote, at least half of them can't understand it. I have directly dismissed many book friends, alas!

The protagonist travels to the Ultra Universe and evolves into the ultimate life form step by step. Maybe the author should give a template for the protagonist's image.

The protagonist wants to become the ultimate life form and complains about the statuette. The Ampera star is not qualified, but what about the protagonist himself? He is petty and has no sense of the overall situation. In the final analysis, he still lacks self-confidence. Even his scientists have to rely on means to control... And he is afraid of this...

After reading it for a while, I realized that in the previous chapters, the protagonist also had to protect this and that, the whole nanny. If the protagonist only protected me occasionally, I wouldn't say it, but it was as if the Japanese in it were the protagonist's parents. Why, the author likes to be Japanese so much. As a nanny, you can save people, but you always save this and that. Is the protagonist's motherly heart so strong? Then why not embody some good things and let all human beings evolve? To be honest, the writing is okay, but the character of the protagonist is not well developed in the early stage. Apart from the protagonist, everything else is fine.

Author, let me give you some advice, please don't stop updating. 1: The protagonist is supplemented by the power of earth, wind, water, fire or the five elements, with light and dark power as the main force, and the will of the earth, similar to Thunder Yatales 2. The protagonist's skills include Xing Tian, Magnetic Field of Heaven, Earth and Humans, and Eight-bit Displacement and Teleportation. 3. The protagonist lacks a gun and must keep pace with the times. American-style Iai 4. The protagonist must have time and space skills, target golden dragons and silver dragons, or Tiga's skills. Don't look at Tiga's useless in the special shooting, but Tiga is throwing corpses everywhere. His strength may not reach the mysterious four, but he is definitely the first person under the four. 5. The protagonist can refer to the Metafield of Nexus and install weapons similar to Nexus on Kuuga's arm to build a field. 6. You can act chivalrously and hunt aliens to become a Kuuga Knight. 7. As long as you are a knight, the guy from the Imperial Cavalry can break through dimensions and come here. If you expand to the world of knights, you can have a dimensional wall. Specifically, it's the journey of the Imperial Cavalry. 8. You can spread the Kuuga Tokusatsu drama to the Tiga world, and you can obtain the coordinates and support of the Kingdom of Light from Ultraman. 9. You can save a beam of light from Tiga, go to the world of Aix to get the Tiga stone elephant and the divine light stick, and you can also get an Ultra armed pistol.

Five points at the beginning, zero points afterward, average one point

If you write too much about your inner drama and talk to yourself too much, it will become a disease of youth. There is no need to explain all the details. The author has a strong desire for expression, but to be honest, such an author is not likable.

At present, it seems that there are too many third-person descriptions and too much nonsense. The psychological description is okay, not too much. Then there are too many third-person narrations, and too many things are brought in. There are too many kinds of nonsense. To put it simply, when I first read it, I was a little discouraged. For example, this is one thing, and then it is another thing. Then there are various theories and various third-person descriptions.

Play Kamen Rider in Ultraman. What did the author think?

There is too much nonsense, too shaky, the protagonist is talking to himself a little, and has no desire to continue reading.