Konoha: I, Uchiha, Propose to Nohara Rin at the Beginning

I am really disgusted by plucking hair from my die-hard subordinates for money and losing everything. It really disgusts me. It's rubbish.

Funny, Phoenix Fire has to be redeemed in the system. It took me a long time to learn it on my own. Why don't you go to the clan to ask for it? It's only a C-level ninjutsu. I'm afraid I won't give you a genin from the ninja clan. Everyone has a copy of the powerful fire ball. Also, the level of the ninjutsu is the difficulty, not the amount of chakra. Idiot.

I don't understand this opening. If you just want to collect emotions to become stronger, you can directly deliver a basic political speech to the Uchiha clan, and then sit back and harvest the emotional value of the entire top management of Konoha. Wait for ten days and a half to stimulate the top management. As the rewards arrive, you can show your super talent and reap the rewards directly. After you can leave the village, you can directly send messages to the daimyo and nobles of the five countries. Information, all the women in your family were spied on by Jiraiya and written into the novel. Then they became Kage-level powerhouses in a short period of time, or super shadows. Then they used a few fake identities to promote the ninja threat theory, spread dragon-slaying skills all over the world, promoted the 24-word policy, directly harvested the emotional value of the world, reached the Sixth Level in a short time, and later sold the news about Otsutsuki and the Sixth Path family secret history.

Judging from the current content, it can be said to be a very high-quality Naruto fanfic, which is a great improvement over the author's previous one. But there is also a slight drawback. I feel that the protagonist is too inhumane. Uchiha Yashiro and the protagonist should have known each other for a long time. Later, Uchiha Yashiro entrusted his life to the protagonist. He was loyal to the protagonist from the bottom of his heart. As long as the protagonist said a word, Uchiha Yashiro would even risk his life to assassinate Naruto. In the end, the protagonist still asked Yashiro to pay back the lawn they destroyed during the fight. The key is that the asking price is too outrageous. A broken lawn requires 5 million taels, and it is still 1% interest every day! Danzo is shaking his head when he sees how evil you are. Author, I beg you to be a human being and change it so that the protagonist is not so inhumane.

Chapter 15: Directly persuade me to quit. I have no brains and can't stand it.

Having said that, I was quite fond of this book in the early stages. The author's writing is online and the character descriptions are quite good, but the further you look at the book, the more bugs and poisonous points it becomes. The first is the issue of the timeline. The timeline in the book can only be described as chaotic. It was mentioned that Naruto would be born in two years. As a result, the third ninja war has not yet begun. Uchiha Madara was not dead yet, but Uchiha Sasuke was already born. This was forced to be explained as the result of the interference of the Sage of Six Paths. I endured all this before, but as a result, the protagonist's reincarnation eyes were opened, and he also received a large amount of pupil power reward from Uchiha Itachi, and his Susanoo was only able to open to the second stage. Some people say that the Rinnegan and the Sharingan do not belong to each other, but the protagonist has upgraded all the way from the Kaleidoscope to the Eternal Kaleidoscope, and then to the Rinnegan. Are you telling me that the Eternal Kaleidoscope's pupil power can only be opened to one stage of Susanoo? I have read so many Naruto fanfics, but I have never seen such a weak Eternal Mangekyo.

I woke up with 80 points, and then added 110 points in the third chapter, making it 115 points. 80+110=115, Nothing wrong

If this book fails, it's definitely not because of the writing. The plot arrangement is terrible.

I don't understand, I don't understand, why is the rating so high?

The viewing experience is good. It's one of those rare Naruto fanfics that makes people want to continue watching. The interaction with the female character is very sweet and I like it. It would be better if the male protagonist has some human touch.