Mondstadt: Start by Picking up the Heart of God
About This Novel
(Original God, Teyvat) Li Chen accidentally traveled to the world of Original God, and after 'accidentally' coming into contact with Wendy's Heart of God, he mastered the power of the wind element. So he decided to embark on a journey with the travelers to find the heart of God and increase his power. But he discovered that not only Wendy mistook him for an old friend, but also other people. "Brother... Well, I'm sorry, I recognized the wrong person." The traveler apologized. "Master Yu Jian Yin Lei, can't even you withstand the wear and tear of time?" Zhong Li looked at Li Chen's back and sighed in a low voice. "If you don't tell the truth, then don't say anything at all!" Thunder God Shadow raised the Naginaga no Inaguori in his hand, his eyes flashing with lightning. ... "Hey, no, I really am not the Master Yu Jian Yin Lei you say!" Li Chen's face was full of helplessness.
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Official(34)Scraped 4d ago
It's another protagonist who fights against Zhongli and finally ends up as CP. The plot never mentions that they are still fighting against each other as CP. Aren't Xianyun, Ping Lao Lao and Gui Zhi more like CP?
Kaia in the Mondstadt chapter is not likeable. It's like having a persecutory delusion.
Overall well written. There are just a few places where I feel there are some problems.
1: The protagonist of Grandma Ping is called Aunt Ping. After all, the other party's transformed appearance is that of an elderly person. 2: The author's description of the Dragon King Ruotuo is even worse than that of Bashi. He would have known that the Dragon King was second only to Morax in Liyue and stronger than most demon gods. 3: The protagonist exchanges photos for the terminal, which is a bit silly
Why is it that every time the protagonist sees a female character, he glances at her twice, and then the other person notices it and says that there is no lust in his eyes? Not to mention what happened when he just met her in time travel, why didn't you secretly glance at Prince Yan?
Was the protagonist really in his twenties before time travel? Even if he was a simple college student, he wouldn't be like this.
[Dear author, if you are still alive, get out of here and write! ][Author, are you still breathing? Please pick up your keyboard while you can still breathe, thank you. ][Author, let me do the math with you. You code one word per second, which is 3600 per hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for six hours, eat for an hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for conception. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, and you can write 54,000 words in a day. So where is your manuscript? Let the donkey eat it? ]
Don't be a stallion. The biggest difference between a stallion and a harem is that the former has no brains and the latter has choices. Walnut, Yanfei, and Xiangling are all difficult to write.
It's said that there aren't many Genshin Impact books now.
Overall, it's pretty good and interesting.
There is a typo, Wendy has become the temperature
The plot is good and logical. (Update soon, I'm really looking forward to other plots in Liyue)
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Official(34)Scraped 4d ago
It's another protagonist who fights against Zhongli and finally ends up as CP. The plot never mentions that they are still fighting against each other as CP. Aren't Xianyun, Ping Lao Lao and Gui Zhi more like CP?
Kaia in the Mondstadt chapter is not likeable. It's like having a persecutory delusion.
Overall well written. There are just a few places where I feel there are some problems.
1: The protagonist of Grandma Ping is called Aunt Ping. After all, the other party's transformed appearance is that of an elderly person. 2: The author's description of the Dragon King Ruotuo is even worse than that of Bashi. He would have known that the Dragon King was second only to Morax in Liyue and stronger than most demon gods. 3: The protagonist exchanges photos for the terminal, which is a bit silly
Why is it that every time the protagonist sees a female character, he glances at her twice, and then the other person notices it and says that there is no lust in his eyes? Not to mention what happened when he just met her in time travel, why didn't you secretly glance at Prince Yan?
Was the protagonist really in his twenties before time travel? Even if he was a simple college student, he wouldn't be like this.
[Dear author, if you are still alive, get out of here and write! ][Author, are you still breathing? Please pick up your keyboard while you can still breathe, thank you. ][Author, let me do the math with you. You code one word per second, which is 3600 per hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for six hours, eat for an hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for conception. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, and you can write 54,000 words in a day. So where is your manuscript? Let the donkey eat it? ]
Don't be a stallion. The biggest difference between a stallion and a harem is that the former has no brains and the latter has choices. Walnut, Yanfei, and Xiangling are all difficult to write.
It's said that there aren't many Genshin Impact books now.
Overall, it's pretty good and interesting.
There is a typo, Wendy has become the temperature
The plot is good and logical. (Update soon, I'm really looking forward to other plots in Liyue)
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