Enter Aoyu with the League of Legends System
by Dream Queen
About This Novel
Luo Ou encountered an accident and was sent to a world where the earth was safe by an unknown great being. When he thought he could become a world-class BOSS with his golden fingers, he joined a world organization. When he saw his colleague, Luo Ou panicked. Morohoshi, Hirohito Saka, Daichi Ohsora, Haruno Musashi...
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Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
Looks good. It's okay after watching it. Keep it first.
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Please ask for the name of the supporting actor. If you need it, you can ask it.
After reading it for a long time, I can't understand the timeline of your novel. It's clear that some human beings are still children, because the eras are completely different from the same era. How about you write it all together, including the plot of Tiga, Leo, Oub, and Zero? Big fight? It's too messy for you to write like this. If the author really wants to write an Ultraman novel, I support it 100%, but can you please rewrite it? What you wrote is really a bit useless. The timeline and plot are too confusing. As someone who has watched most of Ultraman, it is a bit confusing for me, let alone those who only watched Tiga Dana and Gaia in the Heisei Era as children.
It seems that Morohoshi was just a child when there was Dyna. At that time, all his parents were killed by monsters, so he blamed Ultraman for not coming earlier. Later, he only relied on himself and did not believe in Ultraman.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
Looks good. It's okay after watching it. Keep it first.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Long suite building
Please ask for the name of the supporting actor. If you need it, you can ask it.
After reading it for a long time, I can't understand the timeline of your novel. It's clear that some human beings are still children, because the eras are completely different from the same era. How about you write it all together, including the plot of Tiga, Leo, Oub, and Zero? Big fight? It's too messy for you to write like this. If the author really wants to write an Ultraman novel, I support it 100%, but can you please rewrite it? What you wrote is really a bit useless. The timeline and plot are too confusing. As someone who has watched most of Ultraman, it is a bit confusing for me, let alone those who only watched Tiga Dana and Gaia in the Heisei Era as children.
It seems that Morohoshi was just a child when there was Dyna. At that time, all his parents were killed by monsters, so he blamed Ultraman for not coming earlier. Later, he only relied on himself and did not believe in Ultraman.
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