I Can Steal Time

The emotional scene at the beginning is too toxic. The protagonist's own problems are directly blamed on others. It would be better not to write the emotional scene, or to write Xiao as a bad woman.

More than a dozen of them, I will immediately persuade you to leave! Goldfinger dick is useless! Get out of here, you!

Author, your eleven chapters are too poisonous. The whole process is the protagonist's own problem. I don't think about it. If the performance is better than you (the protagonist), according to the strength gap, any one of you can beat the protagonist to zz. As a result, the protagonist can't see through it and thinks he is alienated. He doesn't think about it, so why should he take care of you if he is alienated? After so many years of experience that I wrote about earlier, I can't see through this. I'm afraid I just watched fights.

As long as the author likes it. I don't care anymore, goodbye!

If the author is a novice, this book can be regarded as a book by a platinum author aside from the emotional line. However, the emotional line is too poisonous. Currently, the number one female protagonist really loves the male protagonist, and the male protagonist is obsessed with the number two female protagonist. It is very difficult to fill the gap. I can think of The final solution is to combine the No. 1 Heroine and the No. 2 Heroine into one, but the result will be a romance novel, but the current situation (before Chapter 59) the protagonist has a completely negative emotional intelligence (the No. 2 Heroine has always been helped by the protagonist since she appeared, and the protagonist is still inexplicable) The wonderful guilt is also related to a powerful skill related to her secret. The heroine No. 1 Really loves the male protagonist, but the protagonist only has the desire to win and lose, and can't see any emotions clearly. It's too fake, and the wandering soul has been conscious for so many years. Now the protagonist shows a minor, crisis awareness, emotional awareness, or something else. It can't be said that the protagonist has degenerated into a minor after so many years of experience as a wandering soul and only retains the soul and the quality and potential of the soul.)