Phantom Lord of the Elf
About This Novel
"If you can, please don't give me the power of Star Wishes." ---The owner of Star Wishes, the heir to King Bogui's will, the third youngest king in the alliance, the youngest champion, Phantom Master, super lucky, candidate for the God of Time, a trainer who accidentally got into the entertainment circle because he was too handsome and super strong. A person who was targeted by various bosses because of his time refutation was deprived of his freedom by various sudden events. He had to use the limited time to acquire knowledge with hellish patience. He doesn't know how to solve the incident one year later, but the more knowledge he has, the better his judgment will be, and he will become stronger just to survive better... [PS1: If you find this book interesting after reading the above, you can continue reading the introduction below] There are a lot of dark red fluff scattered in the corner of the room. There are some tiny holes in the blackout curtains. The alarm clock on the bedside has not yet gone off, and only two even breathing sounds can be heard in the room. Duduli from an unknown house roared at the top of his lungs, and everyone in the building suddenly woke up. Han Hao opened the blackout curtains full of holes and looked at Soraya lying on his bed... (PS2: If you want to read the original PM article, it is not recommended to click in...) (PS3: If you like to read fast-paced articles, it is not recommended to click in...) (PS4: If you click in and see the comments on the shelf, please subscribe~) Book Club: 943464961
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Official(68)Scraped 16d ago
To be honest, I don't know what this book is about. I read more than 60 chapters and I don't understand anything at all. This book feels like there is no outline and the author just writes wherever he thinks. There are no transitions except major events, and the character description is not detailed. The protagonist has no purpose, such as becoming stronger. The author also wrote in the article that the protagonist wants to become stronger, but I don't see the attitude and joke of the protagonist wanting to become stronger. The most fatal thing is that the background, characters, world view, and all the events around the protagonist are not explained clearly. For example, the secret gang's purpose of catching Sherabi, and the case of Flying Mantis, the plot is too tight. The author can add some transitions in the middle to let the protagonist have a process of becoming stronger. By the way, explain the background of the villain, and the emotional drama of the protagonist. Either he will be obsessed with a female protagonist, or he will have a harem! ! ! I don't want to cross this woman before I finish describing it. It's too confusing and makes my head hurt when I read it. I won't say more. I hope the author can write better.
good book
It's not a traditional elf text, but it's very beautiful. It's not too bad, it's rare, but it's too dark, so it's not recommended for beginners to eat. It's not dark, it's cruel. . .
The sky collapses at the beginning. Traveling to a parallel world to be a dog licker?
What are you writing about? I think the protagonist is more of a dog licker than a dog licker. But the supporting characters' performance and experience are similar to that of the protagonist.
The writing is pretty good, but I simply don't like the style.
The writing is pretty good, but I simply don't like the style.
Uh 😓
The main character in your book has the same name as me, which is so embarrassing.
The protagonist can actually train the three evil dragons he defeated.
Come on, author. The main text should not be less than ten words.
I feel that the main character's real combat power is only Zoroa. Basically, all major battles are fought by Zoroa. Should the author consider creating an opportunity to become stronger?
I don't really like the protagonist's character, it feels very cowardly
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There are no general errors overall. But, I've read a hundred chapters. Grass Guo has foreshadowing, but the author wants to write a protagonist who helps his friends in the early stage. He has many roles and he can break the situation when necessary. He is like the protagonist. The early scenes should be reduced and downplayed. Although the characters stand up, they feel extremely uncomfortable. Red flowers need green leaves to accompany them. It was no problem to bring them in from the perspective of green leaves, but then the red flowers blinded me. Qin didn't have any foreshadowing. The preparation for the exam at Hangzhou University is pretty good. Are you excited and then go play online games? The foreshadowing is so important, the elf scene where Reiko sneaks in. . . The sense of technology is too heavy, and the charm of the elves is not brought out at all. A bit old-fashioned, go to a group of people in the deep mountains and forests to test. The protagonist relies on the power of his PhD supervisor to win the first place. And the combat power collapsed? One opportunity is not enough, all kinds of treasures come in disguise? There is nothing wrong with writing step by step. Pros. Attractive character, rich characters, first-rate writing. Disadvantages: The novelty of the story was driven to death by the author himself (*｀へ´*). The follow-up might be very good, but I was discouraged from doing so. May the author come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
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Official(68)Scraped 16d ago
To be honest, I don't know what this book is about. I read more than 60 chapters and I don't understand anything at all. This book feels like there is no outline and the author just writes wherever he thinks. There are no transitions except major events, and the character description is not detailed. The protagonist has no purpose, such as becoming stronger. The author also wrote in the article that the protagonist wants to become stronger, but I don't see the attitude and joke of the protagonist wanting to become stronger. The most fatal thing is that the background, characters, world view, and all the events around the protagonist are not explained clearly. For example, the secret gang's purpose of catching Sherabi, and the case of Flying Mantis, the plot is too tight. The author can add some transitions in the middle to let the protagonist have a process of becoming stronger. By the way, explain the background of the villain, and the emotional drama of the protagonist. Either he will be obsessed with a female protagonist, or he will have a harem! ! ! I don't want to cross this woman before I finish describing it. It's too confusing and makes my head hurt when I read it. I won't say more. I hope the author can write better.
good book
It's not a traditional elf text, but it's very beautiful. It's not too bad, it's rare, but it's too dark, so it's not recommended for beginners to eat. It's not dark, it's cruel. . .
The sky collapses at the beginning. Traveling to a parallel world to be a dog licker?
What are you writing about? I think the protagonist is more of a dog licker than a dog licker. But the supporting characters' performance and experience are similar to that of the protagonist.
The writing is pretty good, but I simply don't like the style.
The writing is pretty good, but I simply don't like the style.
Uh 😓
The main character in your book has the same name as me, which is so embarrassing.
The protagonist can actually train the three evil dragons he defeated.
Come on, author. The main text should not be less than ten words.
I feel that the main character's real combat power is only Zoroa. Basically, all major battles are fought by Zoroa. Should the author consider creating an opportunity to become stronger?
I don't really like the protagonist's character, it feels very cowardly
Details
There are no general errors overall. But, I've read a hundred chapters. Grass Guo has foreshadowing, but the author wants to write a protagonist who helps his friends in the early stage. He has many roles and he can break the situation when necessary. He is like the protagonist. The early scenes should be reduced and downplayed. Although the characters stand up, they feel extremely uncomfortable. Red flowers need green leaves to accompany them. It was no problem to bring them in from the perspective of green leaves, but then the red flowers blinded me. Qin didn't have any foreshadowing. The preparation for the exam at Hangzhou University is pretty good. Are you excited and then go play online games? The foreshadowing is so important, the elf scene where Reiko sneaks in. . . The sense of technology is too heavy, and the charm of the elves is not brought out at all. A bit old-fashioned, go to a group of people in the deep mountains and forests to test. The protagonist relies on the power of his PhD supervisor to win the first place. And the combat power collapsed? One opportunity is not enough, all kinds of treasures come in disguise? There is nothing wrong with writing step by step. Pros. Attractive character, rich characters, first-rate writing. Disadvantages: The novelty of the story was driven to death by the author himself (*｀へ´*). The follow-up might be very good, but I was discouraged from doing so. May the author come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
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Try your best to increase Big D's writing motivation, come on (⊙o⊙)!
Congratulations to the author, I have successfully entered the trap.
Let's wait for updates together! !
It's a great read, the subject matter and writing are good, I highly recommend it.
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