
A Beautiful Daughter-in-law
by Jinyu
About This Novel
Once the modern gold medal trainer traveled through time, he became a farmer's bitter cauliflower. The front leg was sold to an old man as a concubine and forced to die, and the back leg was sold to a dying man to make someone happy. If you're happy, you're happy. If Ji Shan doesn't believe it, he can't control his own destiny! The cause of my dying husband's illness is actually test phobia. Isn't this a point-based question? Let's see how she turns fear into motivation to help her Nth student get a spot on the gold medal list. Didn't someone just say that if she wins, he will let her go free? Why are you becoming more and more flirtatious? I don't know that the old aunt has zero resistance to young meat. If she teases her again, she will really be unable to bear it. A certain little girl: "If you can't help it, don't hold it back. Come on, don't pity me just because I'm a delicate flower!" What can Ji Shan do? He can only do as he wishes, and the couple will go to high school together, so that all the best will be separated, and they will reach the pinnacle of life...
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Official(109)Scraped 2mo ago
The heroine's mother-in-law is really stupid and is too kind to her stepson and stepdaughter, but in the end they are all a bunch of white-eyed wolves. It would be better if the family is separated, so don't worry about them in the future.
The heroine, the Virgin, is disgusting
The front part is okay, but the back part feels like a running account, it is still long and long, and the words are as repetitive as foot wraps (repetitive meanings). What is even more annoying is that the heroine is too holy. (Although I jumped back and took a look, but...), Gave up.
Too wordy
I was a little interested in reading it at first, but the more I read, the less interesting it became. It's really too long-winded. If it continues like this, it could cost tens of millions. Abandon the article decisively.
I would rather the heroine's adoptive mother is a bad person
If the adoptive mother is bad, the heroine will not come back to disturb this rat-like home. Except for the adoptive mother, everyone else in this family is a vampire.
It's so difficult for Ji Shan. After time travel, his family is really surrounded by walls. His mother has to sneak in when she brings him a bowl of porridge that is almost ready to become Xishui. It's so difficult. I feel like there is a preference for boys over girls in this family.
There's just too much dialogue
There are too many dialogues, and the heroine is a bit arrogant. She feels that she is a gold medal trainer, which is so awesome.
So it is true that you should drive without drinking, and drink without driving. Otherwise, there is no use regretting it when a tragedy occurs. After all, it has already happened, just like Ji Shan, who was hit and killed by a drunk driver.
The story structure is good and the writing is average. It feels like the characters in it are all talkative, and what they say is long and annoying. Trivial matters that have nothing to do with the main plot are written in detail and are as long as a running account.
The heroine transitions to thinking that she can go to heaven after leaving the hero's house! Who gave her the confidence?
author
Come on, the author, come on!
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Official(109)Scraped 2mo ago
The heroine's mother-in-law is really stupid and is too kind to her stepson and stepdaughter, but in the end they are all a bunch of white-eyed wolves. It would be better if the family is separated, so don't worry about them in the future.
The heroine, the Virgin, is disgusting
The front part is okay, but the back part feels like a running account, it is still long and long, and the words are as repetitive as foot wraps (repetitive meanings). What is even more annoying is that the heroine is too holy. (Although I jumped back and took a look, but...), Gave up.
Too wordy
I was a little interested in reading it at first, but the more I read, the less interesting it became. It's really too long-winded. If it continues like this, it could cost tens of millions. Abandon the article decisively.
I would rather the heroine's adoptive mother is a bad person
If the adoptive mother is bad, the heroine will not come back to disturb this rat-like home. Except for the adoptive mother, everyone else in this family is a vampire.
It's so difficult for Ji Shan. After time travel, his family is really surrounded by walls. His mother has to sneak in when she brings him a bowl of porridge that is almost ready to become Xishui. It's so difficult. I feel like there is a preference for boys over girls in this family.
There's just too much dialogue
There are too many dialogues, and the heroine is a bit arrogant. She feels that she is a gold medal trainer, which is so awesome.
So it is true that you should drive without drinking, and drink without driving. Otherwise, there is no use regretting it when a tragedy occurs. After all, it has already happened, just like Ji Shan, who was hit and killed by a drunk driver.
The story structure is good and the writing is average. It feels like the characters in it are all talkative, and what they say is long and annoying. Trivial matters that have nothing to do with the main plot are written in detail and are as long as a running account.
The heroine transitions to thinking that she can go to heaven after leaving the hero's house! Who gave her the confidence?
author
Come on, the author, come on!









