Douluo: Twin Rey, I, the God of Thunder, Have Arrived!

I thought about it and decided to open a female main building. After all, the dungeon was about to be changed. The first is our fragrant, soft and cute Bing'er. There is no doubt that this little Bai Yueguang has no dark history in the original work.

The writing style is too literary and too depressing. Fans are meant to make up for regrets. You can write funny and happy things, but they can't be literary or depressing. As a time traveler, you have a broad vision and many roads. It was not a time when it was difficult to move forward without a diploma. If you couldn't afford it, you would hide and develop on a different map. You just clung to that bad place and dangled your head right under Tang Dachui's nose, causing the three most golden years to be wasted. It feels uncomfortable and depressing to watch

Recommended by your friend. I am also very direct about whether the dog will die and whether the thousand dogs will accept it. The most important thing is whether the thousand dogs will die if they kill. There is no need to write a killing plot if you don't die. I have seen so many female fandoms that I feel nauseated, so I'll ask in advance.

There seems to be no big problem with the plot at the moment, but there is too much nonsense, and the description is very embarrassing. It feels like a youth novel. The key is that the author does not know how to write emotional dramas, and the emotions come very suddenly. How can you, old man, leave this young person to study? 😋It doesn't matter if the writing is good, but the key point is if the writing is too bad, just write the plot well. You are not suitable for this aspect, it is too weak. It would be much better if the plot was more compact.

There are too many descriptions, too verbose, and he always just looks at him like that. Even if things are like this, Tianshui still lets people go to Tiandou. Even if they don't join the academy, they still have to stay under their noses. The gods are here.

Martial Soul Rey feels second only to Martial Soul Puni. It is a bit like the supreme Rey in high-dimensional multi-dimensionality who casts a little favor on the protagonist. Its actual strength is higher than that of Dragon God, especially in its evolved form. Even in Lei Xiaoyi's form, he is still at the level of a god-level martial spirit.

It looks pretty good so far. Just don't accept Bibi Dong as the heroine and don't whitewash some characters.

Dear friends, it is very important to follow up on reading during the testing period. Decide on the data of this book and don't let the book become a cultivator. Secondly, this book is not brainless. I hope that after reading it, readers can travel through Douluo one day and survive better and become stronger!

Author, author, update quickly. If you don't update, I will send you a razor blade. I finally found one that is still readable. The author must not stop updating.

The time spent between Shui Bing'er and the protagonist was very touching and beautiful to watch. I directly support Shui Binger.