Douluo: Twin Rey, I, the God of Thunder, Have Arrived!

The writing style is too literary and too depressing. Fans are meant to make up for regrets. You can write funny and happy things, but they can't be literary or depressing. As a time traveler, you have a broad vision and many roads. It was not a time when it was difficult to move forward without a diploma. If you couldn't afford it, you would hide and develop on a different map. You just clung to that bad place and dangled your head right under Tang Dachui's nose, causing the three most golden years to be wasted. It feels uncomfortable and depressing to watch

I thought about it and decided to open a female main building. After all, the dungeon was about to be changed. The first is our fragrant, soft and cute Bing'er. There is no doubt that this little Bai Yueguang has no dark history in the original work.

I think it's okay, but I still can't hold it tight It took half a year to go from level one to level ten. As a result, after absorbing the soul ring and raising it to level 15 (speaking of which, a 400-year-old soul ring, how can you directly raise it to level 5), it took two and a half years to raise it from level 15 to level 20. There are still two and a half years left to get the soul ring. I'm a little speechless What kind of school is Notting College? It's just a shabby low-level college. I know Tang Dachui is here, and if I can't offend you, I won't leave, so I'll just stick there. Then when people don't come, you start to expose your soul ring and just laugh, and others will sigh, "So you smile like this, you idiot, you are such an idiot." Seeing that you want to show off your writing skills, I feel a little speechless. Forget it like this, I waited for more than half a year, went to Tianshui College, and then directly exposed the second martial spirit, and then asked others if they could invest? Can I write you a letter to join Tiandou? No, buddy, you are exposed as sloppy and a bit stupid. Even if it's exposed, why do you have to go to Tiandou? I'm speechless.

There seems to be no big problem with the plot at the moment, but there is too much nonsense, and the description is very embarrassing. It feels like a youth novel. The key is that the author does not know how to write emotional dramas, and the emotions come very suddenly. How can you, old man, leave this young person to study? 😋It doesn't matter if the writing is good, but the key point is if the writing is too bad, just write the plot well. You are not suitable for this aspect, it is too weak. It would be much better if the plot was more compact.

Recommended by your friend. I am also very direct about whether the dog will die and whether the thousand dogs will accept it. The most important thing is whether the thousand dogs will die if they kill. There is no need to write a killing plot if you don't die. I have seen so many female fandoms that I feel nauseated, so I'll ask in advance.

There are too many descriptions, too verbose, and he always just looks at him like that. Even if things are like this, Tianshui still lets people go to Tiandou. Even if they don't join the academy, they still have to stay under their noses. The gods are here.

I don't want to give you a low star so as not to disturb you, but I couldn't help it in the first chapter. You must travel through the Holy Soul Village. He also awakened his martial spirit with Tang San. You have such a terrifying vision of awakening your martial spirit. Tang Hao doesn't want to understand? Then I'll kill you later and form a grudge?

What was written was very long-winded.

Dear friends, it is very important to follow up on reading during the testing period. Decide on the data of this book and don't let the book become a cultivator. Secondly, this book is not brainless. I hope that after reading it, readers can travel through Douluo one day and survive better and become stronger!

I don't understand. As far as Rey is concerned, it has to be the ultimate thunder, plus destruction and holy spirit attributes. I didn't see any suppression of the ultimate attributes. Dou Erli clearly mentioned that the ultimate attributes have a strong suppression power on other non-extreme attributes.