Nine Realms Mortal Immortals

Most of the fantasy novels in the past few years are waste material and reborn as a stallion, and they are copied completely from the book. It's disgusting! ! ! This book is good. I hope the author can finish it seriously. It doesn't matter if it takes your time. As the saying goes, the smell of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley! As a free prostitute, I will give you five-star reviews, hehe.

The realm span is too big. Don't you think it's outrageous that a Qi practitioner with an immortal magic weapon and a golden elixir can still hurt the Nascent Soul? With such an outrageous weapon, he would be satisfied with a dozen Qi training weapons. Don't you think that low-level weapons at his level are just impurities for him? But you can just like a fantasy novel, directly practice Qi and hold a star core fairy sword, and also refine it. At this level, if you don't die at a glance, you are a heifer. If you come up, you can kill more than a dozen golden elixirs, chop up the ancestor of Nascent Soul, and kill the foundation building like a chicken. You are a real cow. Fantasy doesn't even dare to write about the protagonist being able to use anything beyond the Immortal level or the Emperor level at will, and fight in three realms, and some are at most auxiliary.

This writing is a mess! The realm of combat power has collapsed. Yesterday, I crossed three or four realms and killed my seniors. It was so funny... The pace of upgrading myself and those around me was even more chaotic. In addition, I basically don't know how to write fighting scenes, and I'm even worse at writing dungeon secrets. I enter it and play it twice and it's over... The main story line is not clear, it is about various forces and various infernal affairs. In fact, if the concept is clear, it is quite interesting, but it is a pity. As for the settings, it is even more difficult to delve into. For example, reincarnation can be controlled at will, and some forces can control reincarnation at will. This setting itself is a big bug.

The plot at the beginning is quite good. Although the protagonist's leap-frogging battles are a bit exaggerated, there is nothing wrong with it overall. However, it becomes a bit outrageous later on. When the protagonist quickly improves his cultivation, the protagonist basically stops taking action and relies solely on his subordinates to fight. The question is whether the supporting villains can be written less stupidly. I wrote the same villain idea eight hundred times and I was speechless. Those people are stupid. They act as if they will die if they don't take the initiative to cause trouble for the protagonist. Of course, there are such people and I understand, but I really think they are all such people. I can't stand it anymore, but overall it's still acceptable, but when it comes to the middle part of the nine realms, I really can't stand it. The writing is a bit too messy, and the plot can be said to jump around. The overall concept is quite good, but there are too many chores in the underworld. At one point, I think this is entirely because of the author's gimmick, omitting the main plot of the protagonist's cultivation and saving a little bit. I know this is to quickly improve the protagonist's cultivation so as to prepare for the future, but the writing is still too messy. I can't stand it after about 1,000 chapters.

It was pretty good at first, but it got worse and worse in the upper three realms. It felt like it was transitioning from a novel about cultivating immortals to an interstellar war. I jumped at the descriptions of the battleships. . The younger siblings who were born outside Fang Chen's parents and have never met were actually met by Fang Chen. This kind of plot is so dreamy. . There are also character names, which are not very good, 😘 Like that top-quality spiritual stone, it has the spiritual power of ancient times, and there are some exercises from ancient times. It feels like reading a primary school text. . . Wouldn't it be more noble to replace the word 'ancient' with 'ancient' or 'ancient'?

Author, for the sake of me checking for updates every ten minutes, could you please add an update chapter?

I feel awkward after reading the first two chapters. How do you expect someone to insist on reading your novel? Whether it is in the book or in the real world, if there is such a good thing, I will 100% agree to it. Any national feelings are all fake.

Cycle, cycle, cycle, cycle, cycle, cycle

It looks good, but sometimes I think it's a lot of nonsense!

It's a great book. I've been following it for more than a year. I came from other places at first. This book is very interesting. It has many pitfalls and opens up my imagination. The map is interesting.