A Gentle Breeze Creeps into My Heart
About This Novel
It's raining! It's so cold, my love, when will you come to me? I don't know if the water on my face is tears or rain. "I will never leave you alone." "I don't need it." "You need it." "I don't need it at all" "You will definitely need it" ... Content tags: Ancient words\u002FJianghu\u002FMartial arts\u002FChaotang
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Official(2)Scraped 7d ago
A little, the writing style is okay, but there are too many characters appearing at once, and it is easy for people to lose the sense of involvement. You can focus on describing the main line first, and then slowly introduce more characters later, but this is just a little suggestion from me! Don't take it too seriously. You have your own ideas. Just do what you think. Just stick to it!
Shu Huang... It's very well written.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 7d ago
A little, the writing style is okay, but there are too many characters appearing at once, and it is easy for people to lose the sense of involvement. You can focus on describing the main line first, and then slowly introduce more characters later, but this is just a little suggestion from me! Don't take it too seriously. You have your own ideas. Just do what you think. Just stick to it!
Shu Huang... It's very well written.
