Mountain Private School
About This Novel
Chen Yiyi, a girl from a mountain village, accidentally entered a private school in the mountains, and the legendary story unfolded here.
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Ling'er and - romantic love
1 It can be seen that this is the author's first novel. The writing is not bad, the content is rich, and it is worth reading. Adding pictures to the article will make it even better! Come on! 👍👍👍👍👍💀💀💀💀
Linger and Yiyi are so sweet that you feel tired
1. It can be seen that this is the author's first novel, and the writing style is still very green. However, from the first chapter to nearly sixty chapters now, the progress of the author's narrative techniques can be seen with the naked eye, but he still needs to continue to work hard. 2. Some plots are rather abrupt, such as Long Ying's proposal. Although I am an All Party member, I think there can be more psychological descriptions and profile descriptions, and some transitions. 3. The character creation is still not rich enough. I feel that the characters can be described from multiple angles: psychology, action, language, portrait, details, and summary. 4. Remember to use the foreshadowing you laid in the past~ 5. To dig deeper, don't just write superficial things. 6. I hope the author will become better. Come on🦆
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Official(2)Scraped 2mo ago
Ling'er and - romantic love
1 It can be seen that this is the author's first novel. The writing is not bad, the content is rich, and it is worth reading. Adding pictures to the article will make it even better! Come on! 👍👍👍👍👍💀💀💀💀
Linger and Yiyi are so sweet that you feel tired
1. It can be seen that this is the author's first novel, and the writing style is still very green. However, from the first chapter to nearly sixty chapters now, the progress of the author's narrative techniques can be seen with the naked eye, but he still needs to continue to work hard. 2. Some plots are rather abrupt, such as Long Ying's proposal. Although I am an All Party member, I think there can be more psychological descriptions and profile descriptions, and some transitions. 3. The character creation is still not rich enough. I feel that the characters can be described from multiple angles: psychology, action, language, portrait, details, and summary. 4. Remember to use the foreshadowing you laid in the past~ 5. To dig deeper, don't just write superficial things. 6. I hope the author will become better. Come on🦆
