Peerless Douluo: Huo Yuhao's Brother, Fengyao Template
About This Novel
[Peerless Tang Sect fan fiction, the protagonist's positive character, Huo Yuhao's brother, golden finger power lock, Fengyao template] Ten thousand years after Tang San became a god, Douluo Continent was almost reduced to the Tang family's back garden! Huo Ling traveled through time and became Huo Yuhao's twin brother, awakened the body of the martial spirit, bound the Fengyao template, and awakened the second martial spirit, the White Tiger Superpower Lock! Huo Yun'er died of illness, and the two brothers settled in the Star Forest to train themselves, just to make those who bullied them pay the price! The Tang Shenwang himself thought that everything was under control, but the situation had already developed out of control, and the long-planned plan was like a dream! [The protagonist is a positive character! Jie Jie Jie!
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Official(58)Scraped 3d ago
I don't really want a heroine (if I have to, I'd rather be auspicious beast)
Why can't the two original martial arts find a way to find the original sect? It's hard to say for Huo Yuhao, but the main character will definitely be chosen.
Don't want a heroine
If you are all Feng Yao, it is best not to have a female protagonist. Although the popularity of the fanfic may be low without a female protagonist, if you put the pure warrior template of Feng Yao and have a female protagonist, it will instantly become unattractive. If you want to write, just write about pure fighting! So I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine... Say the important things three times!
The first spirit body. The second martial soul ability lock. Then why not use the first martial spirit? And who is the heroine?
In the last picture, the protagonist forgave Dai Hao and Huo Yuhao, changed their names back to Dai, and then together with Dai Yuhao, they became the dogs of the Great God King of Tang Dynasty, accompanying him to the side of the Great God King of Tang Dynasty.
It's like shit, no matter how you say it, it's embarrassing to look at.
It's the nanny again. It's so awesome that Klaas is doing things around Huo Nu openly. I don't understand how Huo Dog can be saved? ,
There seems to be no distinction between power locks. For example, if the Lion King gets the Huo Linfei power lock, he will only be summoned by his own Lion King, not Huo Linfei.
What I wrote above is okay, but having Ma Xiaotao as the heroine is too disappointing. According to Shrek's own evaluation standards, Ma Xiaotao is completely an evil person.
Come on, don't write broken, broken and unfinished stories.
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Community(0)
Official(58)Scraped 3d ago
I don't really want a heroine (if I have to, I'd rather be auspicious beast)
Why can't the two original martial arts find a way to find the original sect? It's hard to say for Huo Yuhao, but the main character will definitely be chosen.
Don't want a heroine
If you are all Feng Yao, it is best not to have a female protagonist. Although the popularity of the fanfic may be low without a female protagonist, if you put the pure warrior template of Feng Yao and have a female protagonist, it will instantly become unattractive. If you want to write, just write about pure fighting! So I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine... Say the important things three times!
The first spirit body. The second martial soul ability lock. Then why not use the first martial spirit? And who is the heroine?
In the last picture, the protagonist forgave Dai Hao and Huo Yuhao, changed their names back to Dai, and then together with Dai Yuhao, they became the dogs of the Great God King of Tang Dynasty, accompanying him to the side of the Great God King of Tang Dynasty.
It's like shit, no matter how you say it, it's embarrassing to look at.
It's the nanny again. It's so awesome that Klaas is doing things around Huo Nu openly. I don't understand how Huo Dog can be saved? ,
There seems to be no distinction between power locks. For example, if the Lion King gets the Huo Linfei power lock, he will only be summoned by his own Lion King, not Huo Linfei.
What I wrote above is okay, but having Ma Xiaotao as the heroine is too disappointing. According to Shrek's own evaluation standards, Ma Xiaotao is completely an evil person.
Come on, don't write broken, broken and unfinished stories.
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