Son of Origin: Ultimate Douluo

Who is the heroine? Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah

I only have a month to write, so I won't give random marks. Are these people so stupid?

This is the second fanfic I have written. I abandoned the first one. First of all, Son of Origin is a small series I will follow in the future. My expectations for it are much higher than those of Full-width Reincarnation. But something went wrong, that is, because my original story "Children of the Origin: The Road to the Origin" was not written yet, this article could not be continued from the previous one. Except for me who knew the previous story, it was a bit difficult for others to read, so the collection was not so fast and large. Now I want to change it into a normal fanfic, but I don't know if everyone will accept it.

May I ask what is the name of Dou Si in that, uh, doomsday chapter?

I love listening to it. I hope the author can write more.

I feel like the protagonist of this book is not like the protagonist, but like a supporting character...

Bai Xiu Xiu Bai Xiu Xiu Bai Xiu Xiu Bai Xiu Xiu

The writing is very good. There are currently too few people writing about Ultimate Douluo. They are basically Douluo 1 and 2.

Why is it so difficult to find a book that is not about the sons of Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena? How come the Ultimate Douluo is all dressed as their sons? There is no need to open it when their sons are dead. The Lord of Planes, the Core of Life, the God of Destruction, the God of Life, and there is also Tang San who leads the circle of great gods. If you don't understand it, you can mess it up casually, but there is still a first-level god. Dou Si belongs to the Tang family, do they still need to change their destiny? I just sit back and wait for the finale, waiting for my younger brother or older brother Lan Xuanyu to create the Shenlong Realm, which is basically the Tang family universe. When I travel to Dou Si, Teacher Nana protects Gu Yuena in the early stage, recognizes her father in the middle stage, and the circle of gods returns in the later stage. Writing Dou Four is completely adapted from the original work. Give it a try, and write a little more awesome. As long as it's about being their son, the plot is almost already known. I've written it over and over again, that's all, nothing new. However, when it comes to Dou Si, it is difficult to have a divine status without becoming a member of the Tang family, unless you become a dog, cheat, or restart.

The writing is good, but the rest of the writing is a bit lame