Versatile Mage's Dimensional Authority

After changing some previous chapters, I discovered the biggest problem in this book - almost everything is perfect. The protagonist's path is too easy, there are no ups and downs of the plot, no waves. It seems that foresight makes the protagonist take every step just right, and even one-third of Pluto's power makes the protagonist the strongest human being. Even if the Chaos Bead absorbs residual thoughts, he has practiced hard to the sixth spiritual realm, the high-level undead system resists the undead transformation, and the curse relies on physical skills and the power of the armor. Reasonable and unreasonable. The growth lines of Mo Fan, Monkey and Mu Bai in the original novel are very real. Big Mo Fan, the helplessness of Bo City, the regret of Xu Zhaoting's death, the ancient capital is like a boat trying its best. After knowing the experimental site of Bo City, when they arrived in Beiyuan, they made sure that Beiyuan would never become the next Bo City. In the battle to protect the magical capital, he refused the orders of the military leader and risked his life to fight. If Da Mofan is both good and evil, Monkey is the real positive energy and pure justice. Bocheng saw He Yu dying to protect him. Gudu learned that he had a chance to be the same as the villagers in Weiju and took the initiative to jump into the evil abyss. The Dragon King Ant incident even risked his life to find the truth. Mu Bai was even more successful in portraying him. At the beginning of Bo City, the children of the aristocratic family made people feel like little villains. When he became the pioneer team of Tianlan Magic High School, he led Bo City to survive and opened a commercial street in the ancient capital, which made them live a better life. The image of a small villain became calm and responsible. From then on, only Fanxue Mountain in the whole world is his destination, and he transforms into a judge of the underworld to protect this only remaining home when Zhao Jing invades. The finale is even more righteous. 🤗Without a doubt. The best way to promote the protagonist's growth is to kill someone close to him. Farewell is an eternal memory. So far, the protagonist Jinhua has invested the most in is Mu Ningxue. I'll try another way. After the relatively relaxed volume of the second volume and Mu Mu's World Journey, the next volume is about a world in chaos. The advantages of reading through books and foresight will also be lost. I have some ideas for the time being, and I will try my best to present them.

Can you please stop interspersing those introductions and so on? It was so chaotic that everyone was confused looking at it. The plot also feels incoherent. Can you refer to what others have written?

The writing is very good, but it is too fast. Reading the book is like reading the introduction, and the content is not very rich.

Author, I feel like the timeline is a bit messy!

In fact, I think Mu Ningxue and Irene are the better female leads. If that doesn't work, just add Astraea. Lingling, I think there is a slight age difference, and how long it will take for them to develop feelings. I also don't think Mu Nujiao is good. In the later stage, I think the protagonist will need help. So I think 2-3 female leads are enough.

Reading the comments and introduction, I think it's okay. I hope it can be completed.

It's pretty good, but the segmentation is a bit unclear and a bit hard to understand.

Author, why did you suddenly stop updating?

Talk about the Holy City and the Angels. Let me use a metaphor. The holy city and angels in the whole French world are equivalent to the relationship between test-tube babies and test tubes for people in the whole French world. When you are young, he is a protective shield, but when you grow up, he will restrict you. For Mo Fan in the original work, Archangel has done all the bad things. But from the perspective of ordinary people, the Archangel eliminated an emperor who could carry Sha Yuan everywhere. The trip to Antarctica interrupted the Antarctic Emperor's global cooling, and Xuexue was caught from Mo Fan's perspective, and his talent was also taken away. Judging from the results, daring to interrupt the Roof Emperor did indeed cost Lady Orolu and interrupt global cooling. If the temperature keeps dropping, many ordinary people will starve to death if they can't grow food. Mo Fan's protagonist group, the noble mage, won't be able to feel it. The old bald donkey Sariel destroyed Shuangshou Pavilion. In terms of killing innocent people, he was born In order to nip it in the bud, Shuangshou Pavilion was 90% full of little red devils at that time. What to do if they ran away? Regarding the rail problems one and five, the old bald donkey chose to sacrifice one. But if the Red Devils are allowed to grow, it is still a birth. The Inquisition was born in a pure way. Angels have bright things at least. If you are better at the Inquisition, I will eradicate the heresy. If the Holy City can reform and promote the progress of magic, it will also be a great fighting force against demons. Mainly because of Michael, a conservative in human development, who overly dealt with the powerful mage, which led to the deterioration of the Holy City.

See Chapter 100 I felt that the plot was a bit bland and not exciting, but it was okay. But there's something wrong with the statement, it's weird Then the plot jumped around a bit and it was a bit uncomfortable. Sometimes when I write about Mo Fan, I feel like Mo Fan is the protagonist. It's a bit like AI. That sentence is very strange and problematic. There is no need to write many words for water use