Master, I'm Sorry

There are many questions. I don't know if the author has used his brain when writing. You can write, but you can't write without any logic. Let's talk about prices first. There are seven realms: "gathering qi, knocking on the gate, secret treasure, divine wheel, mysterious female, virtual god, and celestial phenomena". Wentian Peak is the first of the seven peaks and has the most resources allocated. The protagonist's peak master personally receives 500 spiritual stones a month, and other peaks receive 300 spiritual stones (refer to Guanhai Peak). There is a question here. Is the protagonist just starting to collect Qi? Guanhai Peak knocks three levels? Let me ask you, since the realms are different, shouldn't the allocation of resources change? Is it enough to practice? The same living expenses for elementary school and college? The peak master's personal inheritance is so small, how can other elites, inner sects, and outer sects survive? There is also the person who came from Guanhaifeng to find trouble, and the writing is inexplicable. How can you, a person who knocks on three levels and beat a person who has just started cultivating, restore face to their peak? I'm in college, so I'm beating up a primary school student, right? Then you use Master to pressure someone and make the opponent pay 500 spirit stones? Finally, arrange an NPC to brag about your cleverness? (??? Where is the cleverness? You look like a fool.) A spiritual chicken costs 50, and a bottle of essential oil costs 100. A red fire eagle with the ninth level of Qi collection needs to eat a spiritual chicken a day? 1,500 Spiritual stones a month? (Why should I raise it?) The master of Kousanguan Peak personally said that only 300 spirit stones can be earned in one month? There are seven realms in total. Do you think the sixth realm's False God realm demon elixir is worth at least several thousand spirit stones? 100,000 Spirit stones for the mission of killing the traitor in the fifth realm of Xuan Mi? Let's talk about the issue of accepting disciples and the protagonist's master Why you accept the protagonist as a disciple is very confusing. You have been writing it for three years because of your poor talent, and no one in other sects wants to accept you as a disciple. Where is the protagonist, Master? I didn't say it clearly, but judging from your description, it seems that the seventh level of celestial phenomena can be defeated? Peak Master, you have reached the ceiling and have no money to buy wine? Ask your apprentice to borrow 700 spirit stones. In the sixth realm, the virtual god realm demon beast's body is exchanged for wine? The character is also a bit too frivolous, he doesn't care about what he wears, and he doesn't care if he is exposed, even though it is in front of the protagonist, but what about before? In Chapter 39, the clothes there are a bit revealing, so you just wear them out. Although you said you wore them for the first time and didn't go out, I don't feel the need to write about it. If you want to write about the charm of Master, you should write about the strengths and advantages of your book instead of its failures (this may be my fault, I don't think it's a big problem, but I won't be happy if I don't complain) Finally, I hope the author will use his brain before writing. The writing is still good, but there are really many problems.

Linglong Sword Heart is so powerful, nothing has changed after getting it.

Well, the introduction is very attractive, but the content, well, it can only be judged by the beholder and the wise. I can't say it's not good, nor can I say it's great. For me, it doesn't have any outstanding points, but I can't say it's not well written. It's very common. I just read more than 50 chapters, and I felt, well, the protagonist is a bit too much. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist was too deliberately described, as if he was trying to force his way to enlightenment.

I want to read the follow-up, why don't you write it?

Brother, don't listen to others. It's so well written. Keep updating. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbage. If they don't like it, some people will like it.

The prices are so rubbish, the logic doesn't work

There are too many hard-edged edges and it feels quite boring.

The article is very good, and the early stage is also very attractive. The emotions between the protagonist and the heroines in the article are also very smooth. Overall, it is very good. The only drawback is that you have to spend money to purchase a membership.

I feel like the male protagonist is getting more and more scumbag, and I kind of want to see him get stabbed.

It's not bad. I want to see Qing Qian. The protagonist is sober and reasonable.