Martial Arts Extra Points: Start with the Handyman Monk

The first chapter is about poisoning. The little monk said in the temple that the protagonist (monk) is the pretty boy raised by the big monk. If you can resist it, watch it. It doesn't matter if you change gangs. No one dares to say such things that tarnish the reputation of the temple even if your temple is not good.

The author's writing of the martial arts scenes is simply a piece of shit, and he still uses the same old-fashioned techniques of the 1990s, piling up words. Who these days is in the mood to watch you fight around in a Hong Kong martial arts movie? The battle is over with just a few clicks. That's a cool article. Look at what you wrote, the author. Five monks in black from the Discipline Hall intercepted the protagonist at night. They came out and said a cruel message. Then the fight started again, and the protagonist was still caught off guard. Where is the logic in this? When others say harsh things to you, don't you take precautions? I was caught off guard and got slapped with a stick.

The novel is well written, with a clear main line and concise language. The only problem is that no matter how far the protagonist has practiced his martial arts, he will always be beaten by the villain. In other words, the martial arts realm in the novel is unclear, and the level of martial arts system is confusing. The protagonist is a master of the Diamond Fist, has perfect dexterity, and has an iron cloth shirt on his body. When he encounters Xiangde's secretly learned martial arts, Zhui Feng Palm, he is beaten without the ability to fight back. In your novel, is the level of the martial arts more important, or is the realm more important? Is it possible to master martial arts secretly? It makes people feel that the author has not smoothed out the martial arts system of the novel. If you want Xiang De to suppress the protagonist, you can clearly explain in the novel what level of martial arts Xiang De's Chasing Wind Palm is. If Xiang De is so powerful, why is he still an ordinary monk? The logic of the novel must be able to withstand scrutiny

I saw the serialized chapters, so far it's pretty good, 💪!

You already have a panel, but you still tolerate it, are you a bastard?

Don't you read what you wrote? Forgot to set. One moment, Ming Yue is the senior brother, and the next moment, Ming Shan is the senior brother.

The update is interrupted, but it's actually still okay. Can I continue writing it later?

I didn't finish one chapter, so I canceled it. If you forcefully create a conflict, you won't understand it, so you can only turn a blind eye to it.