Jie Lian Cang Yu

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1: The transition to the Age of Ending Law is not very good. Most of the cultivation conditions of the previous generation of geniuses are better than those in the Age of Ending Law. Why are their realms a bit lower? Logically speaking, the geniuses of the Age of Ending Law should be allowed to practice for a few more years. Mastering the return of the Demon Realm and the Underworld Realm is an opportunity, so the return time should be longer to allow the protagonists to develop, instead of the protagonist suddenly jumping to several realms. 2: Regarding the above-mentioned problem of the progress of the protagonist's cultivation, for example, the protagonist skipped the Nirvana realm directly, and then forced a reason to ignore this realm if he was strong in cultivation skills. Then why did the soul, law, or even lower realm stay for so long? If we talk about laying a solid foundation, then the subsequent realms are not needed. Cultivation is step-by-step. It is really too hard. Don't write the rhythm so fast, take your time. 3: There is a pacing issue. The first few hundred chapters are a bit slow, but the later chapters are very fast. Why should the protagonist be exposed in the early stage? Why not let his master live a few more years. Even if the author has finished this novel, what I say now will not be of much help to this work, but I still hope that you can write better works in the future. You can learn something from me, an unknown person, and I will be happy.

Wonderful, but too verbose. It would be much better if the description of some items could be reduced.

If you don't write too verbosely, we will send you a recommendation vote.

The writing in the free book is very good. I hope it will continue to be free.

Without further ado, vote for recommendation letter of conscience The dog barks less, it's disgusting

Hey, originally this book was pretty good. There were so many introductions that I skipped through. It's a pity.

Please update, please add chapters, and please be kind to the author.

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This book has ups and downs of scenes and unique writing style. And the content is novel and unique, which is very touching! And we can all see that the author is not biased towards the protagonist. His enthusiastic and positive writing attitude deserves praise! Another advantage is that the author's writing is concise and clear, and the direction is correct! And the author is not a sleek, sophisticated, arrogant person. 😄😄So everyone collect this book, check in and recommend it and receive red envelopes! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.