
Beast Control: Check in the Mythical Beast at the Beginning
by Reminiscing About Boiled Fish
About This Novel
This is a world where ferocious beasts are rampant. Human beings contract to control the beasts and fight to resist the invasion of ferocious beasts. Liu Qing originally thought that he would never be able to become a beastmaster in his life, but he was accidentally bound to a sign-in system and could sign in anywhere! "The host signed in at Dawn Base and received a mythical pet beast egg!" "The host signed in in the wild and received the holy-level talent 'Deadly Eye'!" "The host signed in at Guangming Island and received a legendary seraph cub!" Liu Qing signed in in a low-key manner every day, silently becoming the strongest beast master, and the pet beasts around him were powerful and terrifying. On this day, endless beasts surge outside the base. Just when everyone is in despair... There are huge beasts standing tall in the sky, and holy angels dazzling like the sun. They all serve one person as their master! (Note: This book is a free work and will never be charged!)
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Official(120)Scraped 12d ago
Is the role of sister toxic?
What's the use of this kind of sister, who looks down on her brother, is indifferent, treats strong people like a bitch, doesn't even know what she looks like, just because she's strong? The author's explanation later is too far-fetched. Because his brother failed to live up to expectations, the sister said bad words to him? Do you think you are an only child? As for family ties, she would rather be able to talk about her brother than let outsiders talk about her, right? Her brother, apart from being disappointed because he was not a beast master, was very kind to her parents, right? He has no problem supporting his sister at home, but his sister is like this? She flatters those who are superior and suppresses those who are inferior, and looks down on those with low talents. For example, she is arrogant in front of her classmates, and is humble and petty in front of her brother who hides his identity. He is like a licking dog! I almost vomited when I saw it! Bad review
I don't want to give it even one star.
It's too poisonous. This girl is dead and wants to forcefully clear her name. Book friends, I have seen the latest update. If there is a problem, the author will not change the outline. I will leave now and you can continue.
Only one star left
What did he write about? Did the author of several books write about loneliness? Is the relationship between brother and sister so hostile? Just because my brother was depressed before? The sister hates her brother and tells others that she doesn't have him? Isn't it too white? Pig's trotters are also so stupid. They are afraid of trouble and like to cause trouble and seek death! The reader's IQ has been thrown to the floor and rubbed back and forth! Everyone, take your time and say goodbye.
The author can
He was able to make me die of poison in just the fifth chapter. He is a ruthless character. Go out and find a job when you have time. You will starve to death writing novels.
I quit immediately after reading Chapter 15.
This woman is so disgusting, it's none of his business that the protagonist has potential. What qualifications does he have? Who does he think he is? ? Write a book, just write a book, don't write so brainlessly, okay? Anyone with any intelligence knows what shame is. OK? Good subject matter is ruined. Goodbye.
About the shortcomings and solutions of this book
The character of the sister you wrote is not very good. For this reason, it is difficult to convince the public like her brother. I can forgive it because this sister abandons a lot of books. Now that you have written this, it depends on how you make this sister pay back the debt. It depends on how you go on. It has been rounded out, otherwise the role of the sister would have disgusted many readers. Now the shortcomings of this book are mainly the role of the sister, and the rest are nothing. As long as you round off the sister and write the rest according to the original, there will be no big problem. If there is a problem, I am talking about it. I'm not saying that it's really disgusting that you wrote about this sister like a gold digger. Now if this book wants to live well, you must try your best to fulfill the role of this sister. Let me help you think of some plans. 1. One of the siblings is not biological but picked up. The younger sister has liked her older brother since she was a child but doesn't dare to show it. It's best if she has a bit of a tsundere attribute. You can add some stories about the brother and sister when they were little. For example, the elder brother saved the younger sister and then made an appointment to get married when they grew up (the male protagonist must not remember this). Seeing that my brother was not talented enough and decadent, I felt that he was not as good as before, so I pretended to be indifferent and hoped that my brother would change. When I saw that my brother had not changed, I suddenly saw a very powerful person and wanted to get close to him to see if there was anything he could do to help my brother. If possible, he could pretend to be her boyfriend to stimulate my brother (because my sister thought that my brother still remembered things from his childhood). This is the most popular answer I can think of from readers 2. The younger sister and her older brother just have a normal brother-sister relationship. The younger sister sees her older brother failing, so she gets angry and at the same time doesn't want her older brother to be so decadent. At this time, a strong person appears. The younger sister likes him and also hopes that he can help her older brother. So every time she talks to him, it's a bit like licking a dog. This is the one that is most relevant to this article and is also the most mediocre. Although readers may feel a little uncomfortable after reading it, it is not too serious. Three. Although the younger sister knew that her older brother was no longer a loser, she was still angry because she felt that her older brother was wrong for not telling the family that it was her older brother. The rift grew bigger and bigger, and finally they broke up and ran away from home to find that powerful person. However, she found out that it was her older brother, and was lectured by her older brother and finally reconciled. This is the most relieving solution I give three types of the above three solutions. In fact, there are other solutions but I am too lazy to type. Finally, I wish you good luck.
Too much paper! Male protagonist with rickets
Is it so difficult to be tough? Is your backbone insulated from you? No personality, dignity, or bottom line?
Vomited
Hello everyone, I'm not interested. It's a new day, whether you are happy or not, sad or happy, I sincerely wish you that if it rains, it will rain.
Don't understand
Why write about such a sister? Isn't this the strength to persuade you to retreat? Why dig a hole yourself?
Why does this book have so many bad reviews?
I read it from the author's first book. Counting the eunuch book and the one I'm currently writing, there are three books in total. The settings of each book are very good. As for the literary skills some people say, it is not necessary. The novel clearly explains the story line and has some ups and downs in the plot. If you want to learn literature, Dream of Red Mansions is a good choice. Many people are complaining about this sister in this book. It is true that this sister is very heartless towards the protagonist, but it is also made very clear that she just annoys the protagonist with nothing to do. In fact, I am quite looking forward to the subsequent plot development😷
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Official(120)Scraped 12d ago
Is the role of sister toxic?
What's the use of this kind of sister, who looks down on her brother, is indifferent, treats strong people like a bitch, doesn't even know what she looks like, just because she's strong? The author's explanation later is too far-fetched. Because his brother failed to live up to expectations, the sister said bad words to him? Do you think you are an only child? As for family ties, she would rather be able to talk about her brother than let outsiders talk about her, right? Her brother, apart from being disappointed because he was not a beast master, was very kind to her parents, right? He has no problem supporting his sister at home, but his sister is like this? She flatters those who are superior and suppresses those who are inferior, and looks down on those with low talents. For example, she is arrogant in front of her classmates, and is humble and petty in front of her brother who hides his identity. He is like a licking dog! I almost vomited when I saw it! Bad review
I don't want to give it even one star.
It's too poisonous. This girl is dead and wants to forcefully clear her name. Book friends, I have seen the latest update. If there is a problem, the author will not change the outline. I will leave now and you can continue.
Only one star left
What did he write about? Did the author of several books write about loneliness? Is the relationship between brother and sister so hostile? Just because my brother was depressed before? The sister hates her brother and tells others that she doesn't have him? Isn't it too white? Pig's trotters are also so stupid. They are afraid of trouble and like to cause trouble and seek death! The reader's IQ has been thrown to the floor and rubbed back and forth! Everyone, take your time and say goodbye.
The author can
He was able to make me die of poison in just the fifth chapter. He is a ruthless character. Go out and find a job when you have time. You will starve to death writing novels.
I quit immediately after reading Chapter 15.
This woman is so disgusting, it's none of his business that the protagonist has potential. What qualifications does he have? Who does he think he is? ? Write a book, just write a book, don't write so brainlessly, okay? Anyone with any intelligence knows what shame is. OK? Good subject matter is ruined. Goodbye.
About the shortcomings and solutions of this book
The character of the sister you wrote is not very good. For this reason, it is difficult to convince the public like her brother. I can forgive it because this sister abandons a lot of books. Now that you have written this, it depends on how you make this sister pay back the debt. It depends on how you go on. It has been rounded out, otherwise the role of the sister would have disgusted many readers. Now the shortcomings of this book are mainly the role of the sister, and the rest are nothing. As long as you round off the sister and write the rest according to the original, there will be no big problem. If there is a problem, I am talking about it. I'm not saying that it's really disgusting that you wrote about this sister like a gold digger. Now if this book wants to live well, you must try your best to fulfill the role of this sister. Let me help you think of some plans. 1. One of the siblings is not biological but picked up. The younger sister has liked her older brother since she was a child but doesn't dare to show it. It's best if she has a bit of a tsundere attribute. You can add some stories about the brother and sister when they were little. For example, the elder brother saved the younger sister and then made an appointment to get married when they grew up (the male protagonist must not remember this). Seeing that my brother was not talented enough and decadent, I felt that he was not as good as before, so I pretended to be indifferent and hoped that my brother would change. When I saw that my brother had not changed, I suddenly saw a very powerful person and wanted to get close to him to see if there was anything he could do to help my brother. If possible, he could pretend to be her boyfriend to stimulate my brother (because my sister thought that my brother still remembered things from his childhood). This is the most popular answer I can think of from readers 2. The younger sister and her older brother just have a normal brother-sister relationship. The younger sister sees her older brother failing, so she gets angry and at the same time doesn't want her older brother to be so decadent. At this time, a strong person appears. The younger sister likes him and also hopes that he can help her older brother. So every time she talks to him, it's a bit like licking a dog. This is the one that is most relevant to this article and is also the most mediocre. Although readers may feel a little uncomfortable after reading it, it is not too serious. Three. Although the younger sister knew that her older brother was no longer a loser, she was still angry because she felt that her older brother was wrong for not telling the family that it was her older brother. The rift grew bigger and bigger, and finally they broke up and ran away from home to find that powerful person. However, she found out that it was her older brother, and was lectured by her older brother and finally reconciled. This is the most relieving solution I give three types of the above three solutions. In fact, there are other solutions but I am too lazy to type. Finally, I wish you good luck.
Too much paper! Male protagonist with rickets
Is it so difficult to be tough? Is your backbone insulated from you? No personality, dignity, or bottom line?
Vomited
Hello everyone, I'm not interested. It's a new day, whether you are happy or not, sad or happy, I sincerely wish you that if it rains, it will rain.
Don't understand
Why write about such a sister? Isn't this the strength to persuade you to retreat? Why dig a hole yourself?
Why does this book have so many bad reviews?
I read it from the author's first book. Counting the eunuch book and the one I'm currently writing, there are three books in total. The settings of each book are very good. As for the literary skills some people say, it is not necessary. The novel clearly explains the story line and has some ups and downs in the plot. If you want to learn literature, Dream of Red Mansions is a good choice. Many people are complaining about this sister in this book. It is true that this sister is very heartless towards the protagonist, but it is also made very clear that she just annoys the protagonist with nothing to do. In fact, I am quite looking forward to the subsequent plot development😷












