Douluo: Martial Spirit and Iron, Forge the Path of Legend

From the beginning of Long Xingcheng, it is separated from the previous ones. The protagonist's personality and behavior seem to be shaped to highlight growth. I suggest you not write like this because of mediocre writing. I really can't stand it. He was calm and decisive in the front, and could even handle things like soul bones calmly, but he ended up drifting away after fighting a few soul battles in Longxing City? Also, it's a bit hard for me to be able to attract the attention of big shots in a battle between ten-level soul masters in such a big city with Contras. Even if someone wants to catch someone's hair, it should be a well-known student in the "intermediate" college in their twenties and thirties, not a ten-level soul master who has just entered the school less than a year ago. To sum up, you can watch it in the front, but you can watch it in the back. It's really hard to be ordinary for the sake of being ordinary.

Brother, please change it, change it to a time traveler, so that you can have the reasonableness of cheating like a time traveler, and also have a sense of immediate sight and reasonableness.

Some next arrangements: 1. Arrange a battle between the two ultimate Douluo, Tang Chen and Qian Daoliu? 2. Does anyone want to see what Tang San would do after knowing that there was someone behind him, before the second awakening of the martial soul to change the soul ring skills, and knowing that Yu Xiaogang's theory had harmed him? 3. How about a mother-son game for Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue? That's all for now, is anyone reading this book? Give me some advice HeroineDuguyan

Take back my comments about you. Apart from the first 20 chapters of your book, I can read it, but I really can't say anything about the rest. Moreover, you can have a rare batch of Dark Gold Dreadclaw Bears and Dark Gold Bears if you want them. Are you overdoing it? It is also used as a standard among the first four soul rings of the Broken Clan. Do you think this is Blue Silver Grass🌿? All over the place. One final point. There are no genius girls in the Po Clan at all. As mentioned in the original book, the Po Clan and the other three tribes have been weakened by the Wuhun Palace for several generations. Otherwise, why would you think Tang San could recover these four clans? The reason is that there is no successor (genius). This is not nonsense. This was mentioned in the original book when the patriarch of the Yu clan and the Po clan discussed it. The last point is that the original academy you made up was established by three of the four subordinate tribes. Isn't that too much? If the entire Min clan can't even afford 100 gold coins, how can they find the leisure to build an academy with the others? And the last point, just because of a hundred-year soul ring, Yang Wudi will accept you as his disciple. Was your brain destroyed by those children before you were six years old? Although the beginning is quite attractive, in the end, it still follows the academic style, and strangely, it still follows the self-created academic style.

To be honest, as a native, how does the author arrange the opportunity for pig's feet? I feel that no matter how he arranges it, it is not as good-looking as a time traveler. The natives are too lazy.

I like Bifeng better. To be honest, I have read a lot of fan fiction. The author's writing is really good, but the settings and framework are not good. The first point is, as a civilian, how can you get an opportunity if you have no background? The author set it himself in the book. Since there is no opportunity, you can't tell me Huang Zi Zi Hei. Who hunts the protagonist's soul? Immortal grass should not have a chance. How can he defeat Dugu Bo? The second point is how the protagonist grows up. It is set to be five years older than Tang San. , So far I haven't seen a way for the protagonist to become stronger. The third point is that if the four major families help the inside but not the outside, how can we persuade the families to help wholeheartedly? In summary, I feel that the character created by the author is a bit expensive. Due to the setting reasons, there is no early investment, and the maximum can reach the level of the four-element soul master. Then one step at a time, step by step, Tang San becomes a god. Suggestions to the author, give the protagonist a trick, either create something similar to the Blessed Land Cave Heaven, where the martial soul is upgraded, or there is a guardian who is so determined that he is invincible below the Douluo, and swaps one for one above the Douluo to ensure the ratio of yellow, purple, purple, and black.

Aboriginal literature is really hard to read. No sense of immersion.

That's not the case. As a Poichi clan whose all soul skills are strong attack skills, they must know about top-attack soul beasts like the Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear, but whether they can encounter them depends on luck?

I feel like the protagonist written by the author is so similar to Infinite in Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles. Of course, this is what I thought😘, and the writing is quite beautiful😘

The reading data of the new book issue will determine the life or death of a book. I hope readers will persist in reading it. The reason why I chose this subject was that when I was writing this book, I took the time to read Douluo II and revisited Douluo I again. Well, Tang San's operation was really confusing after they were connected. Therefore, this book is intended to write about a small character soul master who truly starts from the bottom. Finally, the author's ability is limited, his writing skills are shallow, and his writing skills are not good enough.