
Traveling to Gu Aotian
About This Novel
Momonga: "I didn't expect that the music played by these hands is unexpectedly good." Luo Feng: "Did you hear, Albedo, Momonga-sama said that he likes that person's hand, please chop it off and give it to him!" Momonga: "!! I'm not, I don't!" Overlord fan fiction, I hope everyone likes it
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Official(242)Scraped 16d ago
Five-star praise, very good, a dream start.
As a fat nerd at Station B, I wish you success. If the writing and plot don't fluctuate much, I will always support the author to finish it. However, I would like to remind the author that the plot needs to change in the mid-term. After all, the pitfalls of the original work have not been completely filled, and innovation is the first development force. In this way, highlighting the personality of the original characters and reducing the war song scenes, I have been satisfied with it since I watched it. I can't bear to look at this character's thoughts.
By the way, can the name of the novel be changed?
After all, when looking at Overlord, one usually searches for Overlord. Or the King of the Undead. There are few searches for Gu Aotian.
Why do you want a wife? Just be gay with Gu Aotian (funny) I just finished the episode. I really like Gu Aotian, but I feel sorry for him traveling alone. With the protagonist, he is no longer alone. Thanks to the author, I must keep writing it⊙??⊙!
A very well-written fan fiction, absolutely the best. Recommended to the host.
Search for explorers of different worlds on Baidu Tieba. The team characters are described very well. The poster can go and see how other people describe the characters and foreshadowing. The plot is the story of the world's second guild traveling through the desert near the orc country.
Licking🐶will result in nothing
Has the author carefully read the setting? Momonga is just like a warehouse manager in the guild. Are you serious about licking me, the protagonist? And as a rich second generation who has traveled through time for more than 10 years, why do you want to lick the protagonist of this kind of game where you can make money?_? You can even give Momonga the false position of union president! ? After all, no one really cares about the position of president.
nice. ..
I do my daily tasks
never mind
I have read Chapter 426. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The protagonist is surprised by everything he sees. Please, haven't you read the original work? Even if you can't remember some minor characters for such a long time, it's okay, but for many characters with a very high appearance rate, you can't remember what they are about. And it feels like the protagonist not only licks flying squirrels, but also treats the natives in a friendly manner. He has to explain a lot to them about everything he encounters. Please, aren't you a reckless man? Just passed by. I'm always looked down upon by people in various ways, and I'm just a little depressed, and then I don't care about anything. It's really hard for me to watch this kind of plot. Maybe a kid under 10 years old would have done better than the protagonist, and the protagonist would have become a doormat.
Don't rush to update, quality is important.
The original poster can just lay down some more foreshadowings. For example, the Eight Desire Kings all died in civil wars. But if there is a civil war, there should be 1 or 2 people left. Alive. The Dark Chang Dragon King is stronger than most guardians alone, but it is not an alien over. There is no need to make the final act too weak.
To be honest, very disappointed
I won't give 1 star here. I originally liked this kind of subject, but I hope that the protagonist's time traveling to the past can change Momonga's ending of disregarding human life, instead of accelerating this rhythm. Alas
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Official(242)Scraped 16d ago
Five-star praise, very good, a dream start.
As a fat nerd at Station B, I wish you success. If the writing and plot don't fluctuate much, I will always support the author to finish it. However, I would like to remind the author that the plot needs to change in the mid-term. After all, the pitfalls of the original work have not been completely filled, and innovation is the first development force. In this way, highlighting the personality of the original characters and reducing the war song scenes, I have been satisfied with it since I watched it. I can't bear to look at this character's thoughts.
By the way, can the name of the novel be changed?
After all, when looking at Overlord, one usually searches for Overlord. Or the King of the Undead. There are few searches for Gu Aotian.
Why do you want a wife? Just be gay with Gu Aotian (funny) I just finished the episode. I really like Gu Aotian, but I feel sorry for him traveling alone. With the protagonist, he is no longer alone. Thanks to the author, I must keep writing it⊙??⊙!
A very well-written fan fiction, absolutely the best. Recommended to the host.
Search for explorers of different worlds on Baidu Tieba. The team characters are described very well. The poster can go and see how other people describe the characters and foreshadowing. The plot is the story of the world's second guild traveling through the desert near the orc country.
Licking🐶will result in nothing
Has the author carefully read the setting? Momonga is just like a warehouse manager in the guild. Are you serious about licking me, the protagonist? And as a rich second generation who has traveled through time for more than 10 years, why do you want to lick the protagonist of this kind of game where you can make money?_? You can even give Momonga the false position of union president! ? After all, no one really cares about the position of president.
nice. ..
I do my daily tasks
never mind
I have read Chapter 426. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. The protagonist is surprised by everything he sees. Please, haven't you read the original work? Even if you can't remember some minor characters for such a long time, it's okay, but for many characters with a very high appearance rate, you can't remember what they are about. And it feels like the protagonist not only licks flying squirrels, but also treats the natives in a friendly manner. He has to explain a lot to them about everything he encounters. Please, aren't you a reckless man? Just passed by. I'm always looked down upon by people in various ways, and I'm just a little depressed, and then I don't care about anything. It's really hard for me to watch this kind of plot. Maybe a kid under 10 years old would have done better than the protagonist, and the protagonist would have become a doormat.
Don't rush to update, quality is important.
The original poster can just lay down some more foreshadowings. For example, the Eight Desire Kings all died in civil wars. But if there is a civil war, there should be 1 or 2 people left. Alive. The Dark Chang Dragon King is stronger than most guardians alone, but it is not an alien over. There is no need to make the final act too weak.
To be honest, very disappointed
I won't give 1 star here. I originally liked this kind of subject, but I hope that the protagonist's time traveling to the past can change Momonga's ending of disregarding human life, instead of accelerating this rhythm. Alas
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This is a joyful story about Gu Aotian and Gu Aotian cheating on each other... Simple, right? Anyway, it's interesting, but I don't know if this cute new author can keep writing it to the end.


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