The Wizard from the End of the World

Is the gap between power systems so small? It's okay if there is no qualitative change in the apprenticeship level like level 123. A level 4 official wizard beat a level 3 apprentice and was not killed, but was run away instead? Not to mention one versus a hundred, let's say one versus ten head offices. If there isn't even this little difference, what levels are there? It was written earlier that the protagonist's emotional humanity has not been wiped out, and he will be touched by the woman he saved jumping off the building. Later, he just doesn't treat himself as a human being and randomly uses people for experiments. Are you trying to highlight a cute contrast?

But it's still very uncomfortable to watch. It feels like the male protagonist has the strength of a fleet and only equips his subordinates with one rocket, but he still needs others to hunt Godzilla. If he can't do it, it's a problem of ability. I feel really speechless.

Very beautiful, I can't forget it

That Fang Yan is so disgusting. Just a holy mother bitch,

It's too short. The author is too short. This is not enough. I need more.

How can I put it? It's a little rough. I guess the author probably didn't write the outline well. He himself doesn't know the direction of the plot. I feel like writing step by step. I would like to give you my opinion. Dear author, if you make the pig's feet black or vegetable, white or abnormal in your book, it doesn't matter. The problem is to reflect the main purpose. You write the transformation. I feel that it doesn't matter what the pig's feet are after the transformation. You write Collect the camp, it's useless after the collection, it doesn't matter, just write about cultivation, you have been copying the memories of the past life, it's the end of the world, it's not in a hurry, it doesn't matter, I feel like I've been reading it for a long time, I don't know what you want to express, in fact, in my opinion, according to the feeling of the pig's feet you wrote, you don't need so many lines, wouldn't it be enough to just transform a shadow guard and take the shadow slaves out to use mobile phones, supplies, and capture people? Why write so many other things? Write a bunch of things that are not there. The Shadow Guards and Shadow Servants were transformed just for the purpose of guarding the door. So I think it is useless for you to write transformations and have an indifferent attitude. It is better to just write Pig's Foot as the boss of the end of the world and let Pig's Foot write in the end of the world of dark wizards. The whole country and the world have been transformed into subordinates, and they invade other worlds through space channels to collect resources. The pace of your writing is too slow. It's so watery that the whole article is a waste of water. It's true! It doesn't make anyone want to continue watching! If you have no money, you might as well go out to work, right?

I really like the original Zhutian. I also think the character of the protagonist is pretty good, but it's a bit too dark, but that's not a big problem. It is best to write a story that does not harm your own interests and give the supporting characters a happy ending, so that not many people may be disgusted. The biggest problem with this book is obviously that it is a fun novel, but it is not very enjoyable to read. For example, when the apocalypse comes, the protagonist changes the world as soon as he becomes stronger. Another example is that the chat group is just a world. It is also stinky and long, and the chat group has no sense of existence. There are only a few supporting characters in the latter world, and more importantly, supporting characters are always written because a certain person is controlled by the protagonist. It is really uncomfortable to watch this repeatedly. Summary: It's watchable, but the author still needs to practice. The writing is not cool enough, and the post-production is watery. There isn't much plot.

Even if there is such a thing as a wizard, it will never be able to develop very powerfully. It is barbaric and selfish, and knowledge is blocked. How can it develop?

It's very well written, but there's too little at the end.

That's okay. You're doing your job and you're at home by yourself.