Supreme Shura

The storyline is great and there are definitely too many advantages. Let me just talk about the problems and opinions I encountered after reading it: 1. Describe Lian Yu in a large space, but then there is no sound. 2. They all thought that Cai'er belongs to the protagonist, and they will get along with the protagonist's brother later. , This jump from the previous description to the later setting is too big, and the same goes for Tuoba Yu'er. Since the setting belongs to the protagonist's brother, don't express an ambiguous relationship with the protagonist. 3. The character Gu Yan'er was really created by force. 4. The previous one is the same as Yuren's hatred, but it was also mentioned in the last stroke to clear it up. 5. The setting of the final big boss feels like a random one. I thought it was the old man from the prehistoric times because there were foreshadowings in the front, but the old man in the back is very useless.

I like this kind of books, and of course I like the author's books even more. The storyline here has a lot of development. Compared with other books, I think there should be a lot of room for improvement. Come on!

To be honest, I dare not say that this fantasy novel is the best, but to be honest, it is not bad. After all, fantasy online novels are basically the same routine, and it is difficult to write refreshing works. The reason why I specially comment is because of the author's great character and temperament. He is unyielding, upright and loyal. He still dares to face difficulties in the face of adversity and only wants to have a clear conscience. This is really the most admirable author of fantasy web articles I have ever seen, and it is worth learning from! Please accept the next prayer!

Alas, after reading this book, I actually felt an indescribable feeling of sadness - ah, such a good book, what should I do if I can never read it again in the future? What to do? It wasn't until I collected this book without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought, if others can't read such a good book, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to sacrifice the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to take it out. The Taoist priest who exorcises ghosts. This sacred book is for the world to enjoy. Please help me to keep this post up and up! Until everyone sees it! %%%%%

As someone who has experienced it, I advise everyone to give it up if they are new to this novel. The protagonist of this novel is not very strong and likes to show off. After showing off, he has to ask the people around him to pay for it. And if there is a woman who likes the male protagonist, most of them will end up bad! Careful! ! Careful! !

The protagonist is a stupid pig. When he got the immortal magic, Mingming Yue'er had told him to give it to his friends in batches, but he was not afraid of being exposed. Later, when the Guangming Sect came to capture Mu Feng, it was also in the fairyland. Why should the sword immortal be afraid of the presiding judge? And later he said that he could hide in the fairy world. In this case, he could let his master send him out and hide in the world. And since the Wolf Kingdom has an agreement with the Holy Sect, why does the Holy Sect need to be afraid of them? Is it difficult to protect a genius? I really don't know how the author managed to write more than 3,000 chapters and more than 700 W words. The author had to read many novels to copy other people's routines. Haha is really the only word to describe this scumbag book.

The front is okay, but the back is not so good. The protagonist has a short memory and likes to pretend to be 13. Others will kill you in seconds. First, he has no strength. Second, he has no backing. Third, he is a rat crossing the street and everyone shouts to beat him. He even leaves him to die in front of others. I wonder what will happen even if the person kills him without saying a word. If he has made friends with the three tribes, can he still die because of the protagonist?

This is one of my favorite books, the other one is Taoist Exorcist. What about you? ? ? ? ? .

Adhering to my identity as a reader, I would like to tell you that if the characters in the novel sing all the way, it is just bragging. There is no storyline and it is meaningless to crush all the way. What is interesting is the ups and downs of life. Only in this way can it be wonderful and like life. A good work reflects the Social, criticizing the negative phenomena of society and conveying the positive energy of society. Even from ancient times to the present, there is no one who sings all the way. Only those who have experienced life will mature. I also hope that the author can conceive the subsequent plot well and grasp the rhythm of the reader's heart. The above content only represents my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize.

Why don't you write the heroine to death? She can't protect her own children, so she doesn't deserve to be the protagonist. Girls died for him. I don't know what you want to express! ! ! There are more than 1,700 chapters that I can't stand anymore. Either you don't write the characters out, or you write them as women in supporting roles. My own woman's son is also written to death, so I don't understand what it means.