The Beginning of Super Seminary Civilization

The Beginning of Super Seminary Civilization

by Writeriycire

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Although what you wrote seems acceptable, it's not my type. Since we create one, we definitely need to be intelligent whether it is a human being or an animal. It's impossible for robots to do everything. What's more, the time traveler is almost like a god, and he will soon be a civilized ancestor, a civilized king who still thinks about smoking. Can't you be more mature? Also, I personally feel that the protagonist has some attributes of a silly, sweet, kid who will never grow up. Since there are some shortcomings in time travel, those that can be corrected still need to be corrected. Don't write it like that of Long Ao. Don't think that after time travel, you will be the second child and you are the third child. The protagonist you wrote is not even as good as Raina from the Burning Sun Civilization. And civilization will always evolve. Since it is a living planet, different intelligent life will always appear on it. It cannot be the barbaric age forever. There should be laws in the universe, and they should develop automatically. The protagonist can directly come to them as a god. The reason is made up by the author himself. Also, the protagonist has a system. Although the system can help the protagonist, it is impossible to rely on him for everything. I hope the injection can make the protagonist exercise more, think more, and do it by himself. Even if the system has bugs, there is a saying, do it yourself. If the author has enough food and clothing, he can treat the system as a plug-in. If the author doesn't understand anything, no matter how much knowledge or energy the system gives him, he will not use it. In Angel Civilization, He Xi's words are very good. I believe everyone knows what He Xi said when he tested Angel Yan. I won't say what the specific words are, and I forgot them. Everyone knows, and they are purely personal opinions. If you don't like the author, I feel that my opinions will not be helpful to you. Or if you think my comment offends you, you can delete it directly.

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