Countercurrent 1999

I think that the fact that you made the protagonist not only incapable of flirting with girls, but also didn't even realize that girls like him is one of the reasons for the poor performance of this book. Another reason is that you made it a bit difficult for the protagonist to make money. These two points are written very close to reality. For example, making money is more difficult in real life than what is written in the book, even if it is rebirth. But this is a novel! Those books with good results all describe how to make money after rebirth in a way that is not difficult and generally looks reasonable on the surface.

In the future, don't touch the products of the three giants. Otherwise, if you monopolize the Internet market, the protagonist will have a hard time. It is best to write a school network, group purchase, and live broadcast, which should be able to gain a foothold on the American Internet.

The writing is delicate, but the number of words is a bit short, so I need to improve it a bit.

I only know that the protagonist sells experimental equipment, but I don't know what he is selling? Do we still have to use our imagination to sell something? Why don't you write clearly what you are selling? Don't save words so much, it will only make people read less.

And the last one, write about the protagonist being in the entertainment industry, just like Wang Sicong, the beauties in the entertainment industry change one by one every day

Not bad, take your time, come on

Is it because of poor grades that the update was discontinued?

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It's well written, but updates are too slow!

This type should be what old bookworms like to read. The number of words is too small now, and old bookworms generally don't bother to read it.