The First Wine Concubine of Space Spiritual Spring
About This Novel
Ye Qiong, who had just graduated from college, had just inherited the family's space spiritual spring, but was unlucky to encounter the most popular time travel on the Internet, but it was a rare time in a century. When she woke up, she saw that she was in a strange place, and she had changed. Ye Qiong was shocked. Then after she absorbed all the memories of the original owner, she had to accept the fact that she was wearing it! Cross! Got it! ! ! Moreover, she traveled to a small mountain village in an imaginary dynasty called Jing Chao, a little peasant girl with no father or mother, and only one younger brother who depended on each other... (Recommended new article: Monster husbands are not easy to mess with, everyone is welcome to support and watch)
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I'm speechless. The heroine's time travel is simply a joke. Why do you say that? That's because the heroine has a very high self-esteem and is self-centered when communicating with others. She always says "that's okay", making it seem like others are begging her, which makes people very depressed. Moreover, the author's description of all the characters is also excellent. There are no delicate emotions, no touching confessions, and no deep souls. All the characters are like puppet repeaters with no personality, no connotation, and no spirituality. They only reread what the author thinks are wonderful content. Just read each chapter and it will be more than enough. The words "because, so, and" are repeated hundreds of times, which shows that the author does not have many ancient words. Therefore, when coding, the author forgot that the heroine traveled to ancient times, and the characters and scenes around the heroine are also ancient times. This makes people feel that the heroine has moved the 21st century to ancient times. It is really tiring to watch. I would like to remind the author that the ancients did not actually have many interjections when communicating, so I am curious about what the author thinks? What does "Oh! Yeah! Yo!" In those sentences mean? There is also Ye Hua, a five-year-old baby who always says, "Sister, I love you so much!", "Sister, I miss you so much!", "It's delicious!" How many little dolls in ancient times would use the word "love"? How many little babies can say "die"? If it's delicious, just use "It's so delicious!" It's simple and clear. How can I hear ancient people say "It's delicious!" It's not a Korean drama or a Taiwanese drama. Making it so complicated and long-winded completely exposes the author's immature mind, and his advice is offensive. Don't criticize it if you don't like it! ! !
I feel very stiff while reading this book. When reading some books, I can't help but follow the scenes in the book, but I can't get into it at all when reading this book. I am a big fan of novels. I will be fascinated by good novels. I don't know when people talk to me without mentioning my name. But this book makes me want to skip it as I read it. It's a bit too long-winded. In short, I think this is a novel without a soul.
Luo Liba is careless, childish, and pretentious.
In fact, the plot is not bad, but there is too much nonsense and it feels a bit long-winded. I feel like I can't stand it
Luo Liba is verbose, the article is not smooth, it feels very deliberate, abandon the article
All I can say is that after clicking on the first chapter, I lost interest in reading it.
There's so much nonsense, Rory. Abandon the article
The story is good but very wordy, a bit like a primary school student writing an essay.
Can't stand it anymore
The plot is good, but too wordy. I can't stand it after reading chapter 100! It would look much better if the verbose words were removed! Of course the number of words will be less!
The author has never heard of a bar! The corn wine will be fine in three days and I'll be drunk too! How can anyone make wine so quickly? It's too exaggerated! !
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Community(0)
Official(644)Scraped 23d ago
Feelings
I'm speechless. The heroine's time travel is simply a joke. Why do you say that? That's because the heroine has a very high self-esteem and is self-centered when communicating with others. She always says "that's okay", making it seem like others are begging her, which makes people very depressed. Moreover, the author's description of all the characters is also excellent. There are no delicate emotions, no touching confessions, and no deep souls. All the characters are like puppet repeaters with no personality, no connotation, and no spirituality. They only reread what the author thinks are wonderful content. Just read each chapter and it will be more than enough. The words "because, so, and" are repeated hundreds of times, which shows that the author does not have many ancient words. Therefore, when coding, the author forgot that the heroine traveled to ancient times, and the characters and scenes around the heroine are also ancient times. This makes people feel that the heroine has moved the 21st century to ancient times. It is really tiring to watch. I would like to remind the author that the ancients did not actually have many interjections when communicating, so I am curious about what the author thinks? What does "Oh! Yeah! Yo!" In those sentences mean? There is also Ye Hua, a five-year-old baby who always says, "Sister, I love you so much!", "Sister, I miss you so much!", "It's delicious!" How many little dolls in ancient times would use the word "love"? How many little babies can say "die"? If it's delicious, just use "It's so delicious!" It's simple and clear. How can I hear ancient people say "It's delicious!" It's not a Korean drama or a Taiwanese drama. Making it so complicated and long-winded completely exposes the author's immature mind, and his advice is offensive. Don't criticize it if you don't like it! ! !
I feel very stiff while reading this book. When reading some books, I can't help but follow the scenes in the book, but I can't get into it at all when reading this book. I am a big fan of novels. I will be fascinated by good novels. I don't know when people talk to me without mentioning my name. But this book makes me want to skip it as I read it. It's a bit too long-winded. In short, I think this is a novel without a soul.
Luo Liba is careless, childish, and pretentious.
In fact, the plot is not bad, but there is too much nonsense and it feels a bit long-winded. I feel like I can't stand it
Luo Liba is verbose, the article is not smooth, it feels very deliberate, abandon the article
All I can say is that after clicking on the first chapter, I lost interest in reading it.
There's so much nonsense, Rory. Abandon the article
The story is good but very wordy, a bit like a primary school student writing an essay.
Can't stand it anymore
The plot is good, but too wordy. I can't stand it after reading chapter 100! It would look much better if the verbose words were removed! Of course the number of words will be less!
The author has never heard of a bar! The corn wine will be fine in three days and I'll be drunk too! How can anyone make wine so quickly? It's too exaggerated! !
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