Turnaround Starts from Love Drama

At first I thought it was pretty good, but as I watched it to the end, I felt that some of the plots at the end were disgusting, and then some of the plots were boring. How should I put it?

It's okay and watchable. The female characters appearing now don't feel worthy of the male protagonist. It would be great to add a lovable female protagonist. Ye Ruojiruoli looks aloof, Li is too unfavorable with her double standards in the beginning, Qi is not very popular, and her character is not pleasing to the eye. Needless to say, Chu did not forget to clean up the previous paragraph. I feel that she is here to tease the golden turtle son-in-law. It is recommended to add a lovable heroine.

It was indeed very interesting at first, capturing the psychological state of several former lovers in the romance drama, but since the time-travel setting and the rebirth setting were added, it has become bloody, and there is also a capitalist boss behind the scenes. Is the author writing a romance novel? I remember that I loved to write this kind of plot in the youth trauma literature I read more than ten years ago. When I saw this plot, I was really speechless. The first part is really exciting, I just kept subscribing, and then you got this? I'm not in the mood to watch the second part, so let's leave it at that. Maybe when I think about it, I'll take a look at this novel to see if there's any twist.

God, this male protagonist is so well portrayed. Every time I see other people's profiles of the male protagonist, I can feel that the author's writing style is very powerful, the storyline is also arranged extremely well, and the male protagonist's mood is well portrayed. Help, I haven't seen such a good writer in a long time. I hope the male protagonist will not have a harem. Every time the male protagonist in a novel opens a harem, the author's writing style and storyline will plummet. I hope the author will write better and better, come on! (Also: Can you update it a little more? It's really not enough!)

I suggest that the heroine should not be one of those girls in love dramas. Ye Fangfei is not very good. If the heroine is Ye Fangfei, I will run. And don't give the b ex-girlfriend anything to make up for the good memories. It's a bit disgusting to watch, and the pace is too slow.

When will you be reborn, before the day of confession? Your mother was not reborn after singing, but suddenly she was reborn. If you can't write it, just choose Happy Reunion, Baga Ya Road

To be honest, it was a good game, but I felt that it was not played well. It was quite confusing. If I want to write about rebirth, I should write clearly. Now it affects the perception. Originally, I didn't finish listening to it in a day. I didn't expect it to end like this.

The plot is okay, but the songs written by the author were spoiled by it.

You don't have an outline to write it, so just write whatever you want.

I couldn't bring in the song at the beginning, and it was so embarrassing that I wrote it originally. Then it slowly warms up to a certain level and it feels like the number of words is low. A bunch of supporting characters can be written in a long time.