I Made a Fortune from Food While Escaping from Famine

To be honest, I know better than anyone else that I am terrible at writing. I am also a writer who is desperate to stop writing. When I first entered the industry, I didn't know how to cut the text, but I also couldn't cut it on the first book, so I cut it when others couldn't write 100,000 words. I remember someone said that the first book should be at least 1 million words. I finished it. No matter how bad I was at it, I accomplished the goal I set for myself. But really, even if I'm a provocative author, I still get angry when I see bad comments and comments that aren't entirely my fault. It doesn't matter if you don't like the heroine or the hero, or the setting, or the writing style, just remove it. There's no need to leave a bad review and say a few bad words to disturb my good mood for the day, right? I think online articles should not only require the author, but also the quality of the readers. Sometimes I type a long word and want to get back at it, but after thinking about it, I forget it. Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you. I don't want to be treated like this, so I'd better not do the same thing. As for my new book, it's not that I haven't written it. The editor looked at it and said that the settings and everything are fine, but that the three golden chapters need to be changed. I have a problem, that is, I won't change the story I wrote for the first time. It's like when I was a child and I wrote essays. If I didn't write well, I won't revise the original text, I will write it again. Currently I am writing other genres on other platforms, and will continue writing apocalyptic articles after I finish my work. As for where to publish them, we will meet each other if we are destined.

These parents are really interesting. The elder's family only needs to pay a few taels of silver every month, and there are maids at home to serve them. They can do whatever they want, but the third family's family can't just buy a mule cart with their own money...

I was speechless when I saw this group of authors writing novels. When there should be space there is none, and when there shouldn't be space there is a lot of it. 😓😓😓

The heroine's mother is really disgusting. There are so many children in the house (including Da Ya and Er Ya). She doesn't want to give food to the children. She only cares about her own food. She is so selfish that she is not in the mood to watch anymore...

I don't like the heroine's grandma who is either cursing or cursing on the way. I don't like the heroine's mother who is a foodie and the husband is returning from a far away place to fetch water. She wants to eat her husband's cake even though the heroine's mother is already full. Please, this is on the way to escape. Others come to borrow water. The heroine even said that she wants the widow's daughter-in-law to return the water. The mother also said that just I have to pay back a little water. I am fleeing from the famine. The water is so precious. [Emot=default,12/] The widowed daughter-in-law felt aggrieved and shed tears and was speechless. The water was so precious and she felt that the hostess did not need to return it, so she did not go to Aunt Zhang's house to borrow it. Persimmons only pick soft ones.

The description of the escape road is like an outing. . . I haven't met any refugees before, so the scene doesn't seem to fit that well.

I feel that the heroine is incompetent and not smart, she is more like a virgin and acts recklessly.

Escape from famine and have delicious food, so what's the point of peach famine?

I don't like the heroine's grandma and uncle's family. If she wears it as a child, she feels a bit childish.

I feel like the heroine doesn't have a lot of presence. Even her grandmother appears more than him and she's not strong either.