
My Martial Spirit is a Devil Fruit
About This Novel
(New book: When the European Emperor Encounters the Card System in the End Times) In Wuhun Continent, Lin You came with the Devil Fruit System! "I am the King of Martial Arts, I can break mountains with one punch!" "Change in shape! Change in body shape! Change in weight! Crushing the earth with one foot!" "I am a martial soul and a long sword, I can fly with the sword!" "Slash the fruit, the sword fruit, the body becomes the sword, the man and the sword are one!" "The elements of heaven and earth are all under my control!" "Then can you become the elements of heaven and earth?" "... No" "Then tell me a hammer!"
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Official(155)Scraped 27d ago
Samsung is gone? Well enough.
But the author seems to want the protagonist to have some devil fruits. Doesn't it feel boring? A lot of books are the same now. As long as it is a series of power. The author tries his best to add more characters to the protagonist.
Bai Xiaomeng's ability surpasses that of the protagonist every minute! I mean the author is digging a hole for himself!
I feel that Chapters 29-30 are too ridiculous. These two chapters show that Bai Xiaomeng can know whatever she wants to know. This ability is really not an ordinary 6, it is definitely 666! She can easily find a lot of skills and secret books if she wants. If she wants treasures, she can just find a lot of unowned ones and get them. She can surpass the protagonist in minutes, and she can also find a way to take away the protagonist's system.
Writing about devil fruits in another world is new
But what can I say, author? You don't think you have explained too much. A skill is divided into several points. The five skills are divided into 25 types. I will explain it for a while. In fact, it is better to have too many so that we can understand them. If there are too many, it will be confusing. When you write a novel, you know what you mean when you write it. We don't have pictures to look at. I just think about it and I don't know what I want to do. I just understand it, but I have four or five more skills. There are more than 25 or 30 explanations. You know it yourself, but it won't be so easy to understand after reading your novel.
About the protagonist's character
After reading Chapter 10, can the character of the protagonist not be the Virgin? His father was beaten, but he only beat his enemy once? And the protagonist's predecessor was also beaten to death, and his enemy only beat him once? Is it okay to be more decisive and ruthless? Author brother.
I think the author's big book title should be called My Devil Fruit Tree. After all, the fruit in One Piece is a kind of ability, and you have too many of them.
Have you made a mistake? Why do you want a girl's body? Are you a body freak?
Water numbers don't look good
This novel is so good and so enjoyable. Other novels are either bad or rubbish, but this novel is super good and the author deserves it.
The more I read, the more it starts to sound a little bit armchair.
Feel sorry. Really, you write too much. There are many explanations for four skills, and there are 7*8 kinds of 4@5 that can be explained by one skill. It's really a bit of paper talk. Writing too much will have no effect.
The difference is very good. Many thanks to the author.
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Official(155)Scraped 27d ago
Samsung is gone? Well enough.
But the author seems to want the protagonist to have some devil fruits. Doesn't it feel boring? A lot of books are the same now. As long as it is a series of power. The author tries his best to add more characters to the protagonist.
Bai Xiaomeng's ability surpasses that of the protagonist every minute! I mean the author is digging a hole for himself!
I feel that Chapters 29-30 are too ridiculous. These two chapters show that Bai Xiaomeng can know whatever she wants to know. This ability is really not an ordinary 6, it is definitely 666! She can easily find a lot of skills and secret books if she wants. If she wants treasures, she can just find a lot of unowned ones and get them. She can surpass the protagonist in minutes, and she can also find a way to take away the protagonist's system.
Writing about devil fruits in another world is new
But what can I say, author? You don't think you have explained too much. A skill is divided into several points. The five skills are divided into 25 types. I will explain it for a while. In fact, it is better to have too many so that we can understand them. If there are too many, it will be confusing. When you write a novel, you know what you mean when you write it. We don't have pictures to look at. I just think about it and I don't know what I want to do. I just understand it, but I have four or five more skills. There are more than 25 or 30 explanations. You know it yourself, but it won't be so easy to understand after reading your novel.
About the protagonist's character
After reading Chapter 10, can the character of the protagonist not be the Virgin? His father was beaten, but he only beat his enemy once? And the protagonist's predecessor was also beaten to death, and his enemy only beat him once? Is it okay to be more decisive and ruthless? Author brother.
I think the author's big book title should be called My Devil Fruit Tree. After all, the fruit in One Piece is a kind of ability, and you have too many of them.
Have you made a mistake? Why do you want a girl's body? Are you a body freak?
Water numbers don't look good
This novel is so good and so enjoyable. Other novels are either bad or rubbish, but this novel is super good and the author deserves it.
The more I read, the more it starts to sound a little bit armchair.
Feel sorry. Really, you write too much. There are many explanations for four skills, and there are 7*8 kinds of 4@5 that can be explained by one skill. It's really a bit of paper talk. Writing too much will have no effect.
The difference is very good. Many thanks to the author.









