Da Qin: I Am Ying Zheng, Join the Chat Group at the Beginning

Before the Qing Dynasty, there was no such thing as kneeling down among Han descendants or the orthodox countries of Chinese civilization! ! Kneeling down and worshiping is the greatest sacrificial etiquette! Except for parents, elders, and the deceased, no one can ask a person to kneel down and worship him! ! If so, it is reasonable and not illegal for you to kill him! ! Even if it's the death penalty, it's still a trial while standing in shackles! ! ! What's even more funny, Qin Shihuang calls himself me? ? ? It's just funny! ! I am the homophonic pronunciation of Shaanxi Huazheng! ! That's self-effacing! ! Before Emperor Guangwu of the Han Dynasty, Tongyi was said to be a loner! ! ! Anyone who is a marquis or above can call themselves a solitary person! ! Most kings call themselves widowers! ! !

This idea is quite interesting, but... The first part is okay, and I can still read it with interest, but as I get to the last 10 sentences, four or five of them are "Who, who, who (or something) and so on and so on." When I hear "such and such" now... There are so many "such and such", which kills most of my desire to read. And all the descriptions of emotions are based on what is in the eyes and what is on the face. For example, "There was deep despair in his eyes", "His eyes showed unprecedented despair", "His face was full of joy", we would say that writing one or two sentences is okay, but it cannot be resisted that he describes the emotions of the characters in this way throughout the text. And... I keep repeating one or two sentences every time, such as "Looking at these armies approaching, everyone's faces show despair, and they look at the high priest with despair on their faces." Why do you write these words every time? In summary, writing skills still need to be practiced, and the emotion writing program is too simple, just using adjectives to describe it. Sitting is fine. For example, some body movements reveal his despair. He does not write the word despair, but uses other words to describe despair. Stop writing repeated sentences. Greatly reduces people's desire to read

Meet, "Meet His Majesty the First Emperor!". If something happens, "See His Majesty the First Emperor!". Chat, "Meet His Majesty the First Emperor!". The answer was, "See His Majesty the First Emperor!". Deal, "See His Majesty the First Emperor!". Anyway, it's "Meet His Majesty the First Emperor!". Before speaking, always say "See His Majesty the First Emperor!" It was as if he would die if he didn't say "See His Majesty the First Emperor!" Even while chatting, he suddenly said "See His Majesty the First Emperor!". . . Aqua from Ouma😐

Level ninety-nine, you are not afraid of exhausting Brother Zheng to death on the way🤗

To be honest, if you ask an ordinary person today to dress up as Qin Shi Huang, he will not be able to achieve the achievements of Qin Shi Huang at all.

There are too many mistakes. Don't write it if you haven't seen it. I am really convinced by the return of Sedum in Sword No. 1.

The author should improve his writing skills. . See for yourself what is written in Chapter 42. . . .

As an emperor, he has not improved his crop seeds and scientific knowledge for thirty chapters. Without development of productivity, he cannot even have enough food to eat...

At the beginning, just brag hard, just acknowledge and respect Ying Zheng. There is no need to put others down and make others feel inferior to him. Ying Zheng cares about the world, but he is still the most typical autocratic ruler. He will kill you if you don't obey. How good do you think life can be under him?

Five stars for the opening concept, one star for the author's writing, and one star for the content. To be honest, the author's writing is not just bad. It's not about the plot, but the writing.